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T h e g o verment s h o uld s p e nd m o r e m o ney i n e d u cation t h a n o t h e r s o c i al services . T o p i c :
Ⓞ ⓤ ⓣ ⓛ ⓘ ⓝⓔ • I N T R O D U C T ION 𝔸 . Thesis E d u cation i s o n e o f t h e s t u d e n ts n e e d s . I t i s t h e p a r t o f o u r l i f e t o h a ve education , a n d l e a r n t h e s u b jec ts i n s c h ool . Ⓝ Ⓞ . ①
𝔹 . C o n t e nt G o v e r ment s h o uld allocate a higher budget for education to sustain the s t u dents n e e d . • B O D Y PA R A G RAPH 1 𝔸 . S u p p orting R e a s on 1 O ther schools lack teachers .
① . E x p l a n a tion for s u p p orting R e a s on 1 We rely on teachers to learn. There is a lack of teachers due to people going to other countries to work, because the wages in other countries are higher than in our country. their salary is not enough for their expenses. especially the teachers who help their parents.
• B O D Y PA R A G RAPH 2 𝔸 . S u p p orting R e a s on 2 T here are students who cannot study.
① . E x p l a n a tion for s u p p orting R e a s on 2 Because of the reason of poverty. The students want to study but they can't do anything because they don't have money for school. If the government gives support to every student, they will have the ability to study and they will not have financial problems in education.
• B O D Y PA R A G RAPH 3 𝔸 . S u p p orting R e a s on 3 I n t h e o t h er p a rt of our country , t h e c l a s s r o om a r e n o t e n o ugh .
① . E x p l a n a tion for s u p p orting R e a s on 3 I n t h is c a s e , t h e y l o s e t h e chance o f t h e s t u d e nts t o s t u d y c o m f o r t a bly w i t hout d i s t r a ction a n d h i n d r a nc e s . W e a l s o c o n c l u de t h a t w e m a y g e t t h e h i g h q u a lity o f e d u cation i f t h e y w i l l p r o vide m o r e
c l a s s r oom t o a c c o m m odate n e w s t u dents c o m i ng f r o m o t h er s c h ool a n d a s w e l l t h e students t h a t a l r e a dy l a c k their o w n c l a s s r o o m s . • B O D Y PA R A G RAPH 4 𝔸 . C o u n t e r - A r g u m e n t A g a inst T h e s i s ① . R e a s o ns / C o n c l u sion o f C o u n t e r - A r g u m e n t
O n t h e o t h er hand , t h e r e a r e people w h o d i s a gree , t h e r e s t o f u s s a i d t h a t i s a n e x t r a c o s t f o r t h e g o verment . ② . R e s p o nse t o C o u n t e r - A r g u m e n t B u t i f w e w i l l t h i n k t h e r e s u l t o f i t , i t w i l l h e l p t h e P h i l ippine economy t o catch u p with o t h e r c o u n tries w h a t they h ave r i g ht now .
• C O N C L USION I n c o n c l usion , e d u c a tion i s a b a s i c building o f t h e n a t i o n . L i k e N e l s o n M a n d e l a o n c e s a i d " E d u c a t ion i s t h e m o s t p o w erful w e a p o n w h i ch y o u c a n u s e t o c h a n g e t h e w o r ld " . I n o u r c o u n t ry s t u d e nt i s o u r f u t ure , s t u d e n ts i s o u r w e a p o n f o r c h a n ge . I t depend e t o o u r g o v e r m e n t h o w t h e y w i l l m a n a g e t h e m o n ey o f o u r country .
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E d u cation i s o n e o f t h e s t u d e n ts n e e d s . I t i s t h e p a r t o f o u r l i f e t o h a ve education , a n d l e a r n t h e s u b jec ts i n s c h ool . G o v e r ment s h o u ld allocate a higher budget for education to sustain the students need .
I n vesting in education can have numerous benefits. Education is a key driver of economic growth, as it can help individuals acquire skills and knowledge that are necessary for employment and entrepreneurship. Additionally, education can improve public health, reduce crime rates, and promote social mobility.
E d ucation c a n b e a w e a pon t o p r e vent t h e s p r ead of p o v erty i n o u r country . Education g i v es u s k n o w l edge a n d i t i s considered a s t h e m o s t p o w e r ful weapon t h a t n o one c a n steal.Nowadays , p o v e r ty i s w i d e s pread i n our country . W e a l l know that e d u c a t e d p eople are easily f i n d o r g e t j o b . I f every o n e h a v e a c h a nce t o f i n ish
t h e i r studies , t h e y w i l l easily f i n d a j o b t h a t i s accurate f o r t h e m . A n d , t h a t m e a n s t h a t b y h a v i n g a j o b , t h e r e i s a c h a nce t o r e d u ce the w i d e s pread o f p o v e r ty . I n t h e o t h er p a rt of our country , t h e c l a s s r o om a r e n o t enough.In t h is c a s e , t h e y l o s e t h e chance o f t h e s t u d e nts t o s t u d y c o m f o r t a bly w i t hout d i s t r a ction a n d
h i n d r a nc e s . W e a l s o c o n c l u de t h a t w e m a y g e t t h e h i g h q u a lity o f e d u cation i f t h e y w i l l p r o vide m o r e c l a s s room t o a c c ommodate n e w studen ts c oming f rom o t h er s c h ool a n d a s w e l l t h e s t uden ts t h a t a l r e a dy l a c k their own c l a s s room s .
O n t h e o t h e r h a nd , t h e r e a r e p e o p le w h o d i s a g ree , t h e r e s t o f u s s a i d t h a t i t i s a n e x t r a c o s t f o r the g o v e r ment . B u t i f w e w i l l t h i n k t h e r e s u l t o f i t , i t w i l l h e l p t h e P h i l ippine economy t o catch u p with o t h e r c o u n tries w h a t they h ave r i g ht now .
I n c o n c l usion , e d u c a tion i s a b a s i c building o f t h e n a t i o n . L i k e N e l s o n M a n d e l a o n c e s a i d " E d u c a t ion i s t h e m o s t p o w erful w e a p o n w h i ch y o u c a n u s e t o c h a n g e t h e w o r ld " . I n o u r c o u n t ry s t u d e nt i s o u r f u t ure , s t u d e n ts i s o u r w e a p o n f o r c h a n ge . I t depend e t o o u r g o v e r m e n t h o w t h e y w i l l m a n a g e t h e m o n ey o f o u r country .