Sports Writing 2024 Dingalan for Campus Journalism Activites.ppt

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This is about sports writing activities for campus journalism


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RONNIE L. RITUAL
PSDS
DINGALAN DISTRICT

“Sports Writing is having the
luxury and power to either make
someone’s day or break
someone’s heart”

Christian Angelo Jacinto
Sports Writer, The Manila Bulletin
What is SPORTS WRITING

“Sports Writing is the only facet of
journalism which bring you good news
365 days a year, sharing the athlete’s
triumphs, heartaches and everything in
between, and inspiring the fans to strive
for greatness, not just by sheer talent,
but most importantly, through hard
work”
Randolf Leongson
Sports Writer
Inquirer/PBA Online/Manila Bulletin Sports Digest
What is SPORTS WRITING

•A sports article, like the news
story, follows the iconic inverted
pyramid structure.
•Sports and news are almost the
same but Sports Writing have
unique characteristics that
separate it from News Writing.
ACTION is involved
SPORTS +News= Sports News

•A Sports Writer’s task is to make his
or her readers feel that they were
there in the thick of the fight.
•Make the readers feel the excitement
of the game
SPORTS +News= Sports News

•Make them feel like they were at the
edge of their seats cheering for their
favorite team
•Make them feel that they actually
watched the game when in fact, they
did not.
SPORTS +News= Sports News

1.A STRONG LEAD IS ESSENTIAL
(including the headline)
ports rter s o d e rt ss o
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Keys to winning

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(including the headline)
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Keys to winning

KEY#1. A STRONG LEAD IS ESSENTIAL
(including the headline)
Good lead should follow
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r res d ered o t or
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o ere e t t e res e ter tpoo
C nf nc a h Yna C n Ani l .
MANILA, Philippines — Humataw si Ces Molina ng 14 points mula sa 11 attacks
at tatlong service aces para sa 25-15, 25-18, 25-21 pagwalis ng Cignal HD sa
Farm Fresh sa 2024-25 Premier Volleyball League (PVL) All-Filipino Conference
kahapon sa Ynares Center sa Antipolo City.
R
B EAKDOWN:
o ee o e se o oe o ZUSC ff w nb cau fJ v lynG nzaga
d e te rte t o r e d ean Th aGaga .Wi i iny u h a lin
•s re e er t t o r e d e s o d e rtte Alway m mb ha y u h a lin h ul b wi nin
R P ESENTTENSE
Keys to winning

KEY#1. A STRONG LEAD IS ESSENTIAL
(including the headline)
Good lead should follow
M pp es t s es Mo
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po ts s tt s t t to ser e es p r s
in mula a 11 a ack a al ng vic ac a a a
p s s r res s
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re er o e e e p o
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o ere e po s res e ter s tpoo t
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R P ESENTTENSE
Keys to winning

KEY#1. A STRONG LEAD IS ESSENTIAL
(including the headline)
Good lead should follow
o ee re o ered ro rstset p d t r ed
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r se tor o esd o t e re er
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o e e e p o o ere e t t e res
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e ter tpoo t
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.
Keys to winning

KEY#1. A STRONG LEAD IS ESSENTIAL
(including the headline)
Good lead should follow
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o ee der e es t o s p t s
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s s p o pr s s
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p t t p o o tr
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ed eeo s s re er o e e e
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p o o ere e s res e ter s tpoo
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Keys to winning

KEY#1. A STRONG LEAD IS ESSENTIAL
(including the headline)
R e re o o t e erted
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d o t e te o s st
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Keys to winning

2. WRITE CLEARLY AND CONCISELY
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.
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Th gam a wiha whichwa w nby
eeo s
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Keys to winning

KEY#3. THE MAJOR PLAY –BY- PLAY IS
VITAL
The major play- by- play deals with
the game’s most important highlights,
the games turning point,the crucial
turnover, the defining moment. It usually
answers the question “how the team
won?”
Keys to winning

KEY#3. THE MAJOR PLAY –BY- PLAY IS
VITAL
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Keys to winning

KEY#3. THE MAJOR PLAY –BY- PLAY IS
VITAL
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po ts o top o re o ds d sssts or e
in n f 6 b un an 5a i f UE whil
rs er o tr ted r ers d o rds or t e
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d o s d e d o o e r s t e
i ahilan‘y n,” ai UEh a c achB yci Zama a h
te st rr ed st rd ter te d
am ju a iv la F i ay af a am buil ing
t t or e o p t t t or t
aciviy in B acay. “Wh n y u u ha UE unif m, i
e s o re re d
m an y u’ a y.”
Keys to winning

KEY#3. THE MAJOR PLAY –BY- PLAY IS
VITAL
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ted t o to t e t rd t o s ed
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se e t t e st se so e t o spree
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t o d e o e o t
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Keys to winning

KEY#4. INTERVIEW (TALK TO ATHLETES,
COACHES)
ote ser e s t e e rt o o r sports rt es
Qu v a h h a fy u a icl
e se t te s t t e t etesp ers ee
b cau i ll wha h ahl / lay f l
ter t e e so t s e s per t e or
af h gam i i byallm an im aiv f
ports rters to et t e e otes d
S Wi g h m aningfulqu an
rte t t er sports rt es
wi i in h i a icl
.
Keys to winning

KEY#5. DO YOUR RESEARCH
ports rters re rese r ers too eore o
S Wi a ach .B f g ing
to t e e e t ppo t t t o dd o r
h gam ,mak i a in ha y u i y u
rese
ach.
KEY#6. MATANGLAWIN
“M p t M p s
agingma angmayag, a angaha ,
M t
aanglawin

Kuya Kim
.
Keys to winning

KEY#7 KNOWLEDGE OF THE RULES AND
SPORTS LINGOS
t es ports rt d ere t ro e s
Wha mak S Wiing iff n f mN w
rt s t e or er e r es e se t s
Wiing i h f m hav ul b cau i i
o t sports d os r o ster s o o d
ab u an ling (jag n , m nlyf un
sports e t e tter s s pe o t ort
in )whil h la i im l ab u w h
e e ts t t e ppe ed
v n ha hav ha n
Keys to winning

KEY#7 KNOWLEDGE OF THE RULES AND
SPORTS LINGOS
t es ports rt d ere t ro
Wha mak S Wiing iff n f m
e s rt s t e or er e r es e se t
N w Wiingi h f m hav ul b cau i
s o t sports d os r o ster s o
i ab u an ling (jag n , m nly
o d sports e t e tter s s pe o t
f un in )whil h la i im l ab u
ort e e ts t t e ppe ed
w h v n ha hav ha n .
s ports rter o s o d e e
A a S Wi ,y u h ul b w ll-
ersed t r es o t e sports t t o re
v wih ul f h ha y u a
rt o t d t e os
wiingab u an h ling .
Keys to winning

KEY#8 USE APPROPRIATE ADJECTIVES
o r o s ports rter s to r o r
Y u j ba aS Wi i bingy u
re ders to t e to ports rter se
a h aci n. S Wi u
de t es or des rpt e ords to re te er
a j civ ci iv w c a imag y
o t er stores
f h i i .
o r o e o ords s so r t t s
Y u ch ic fw i al cucial ha i
ss s port t
whyanaly i i im an.
Keys to winning

1
st
– s er esto s o o
An w qu i n Wh w n?
st
Again
o t s ore
Wh m?Bywha c ?
t e e t
Wha v n?
ere
Wh ?W
hen?
The basic sports story format
2
nd
–p d o
Ex lain whyan h w
3
rd
–p t e s e o t e e
Ex lain h ignificanc f h gam

4
th
– et e ote ro t e
G am aningfulqu f m h winning
p er o te
lay /c ach am

The basic sports story format
5
th
–es r e t e t o t e et e
D cib h highligh f h gam -h
e p t e t r po t
gam winning lay, h uning in,
t e r error
h cucial

6
th
– sert ood ote ro t e os
In ag qu f m h l ing
p er o te
lay /c ach am

The basic sports story format
7
th
–es r e t e os sdes est o e t
D cib h l ing i ’ b m m n
d r t e e
uing h gam
8
th
– t t e te s est p er
Highligh h winning am’ b lay -
s st ts p s
hi a , lay

9
th
– t t e st ts o t e os te s top
Highligh h a f h l ing am;
p er or p ers
lay lay


The basic sports story format
10
th
–sert o r p p des rpto s
In y u lay-by- lay ci i n in
re erse ro oo
v ch n l gy
ro t e s to t e st rt
(f m h fini h h a )

SPORTS WRITING
Sports Writing, however
has a greater freedom
of STYLE

Parts of a SPORTS news
.
The Classic 5 Ws Lead- It answers,
1) Who won?, 2) Against whom?, 3) By what
score?, 4) Where?, 5) When? And 6) How?
Examples:
SKSU poured 10 baskets in the last three minutes
to edge out the SMIT, 65-63 at the opponents
homeground yesterday afternoon.
The Philippines fought with steel nerves and
refused to be crushed by a giant’s 55 points might to rip
favored North Korea, 97-96 in its biggest triumph
yesterday in the Asian basketball tournament.

THE LEAD
Possible answers:
Baler defeated San Luis 25-23, 23-25, 26-24, 25-
19 yesterday afternoon at Baler Central School
Covered Court to the knockout semifinals
where it will face defending champion, Ma.
Aurora
Tinalo ng Baler ang San Luis kahapon sa iskor
na 25-23, 23-25, 26-24, 25-19, at umabante sa
knockout semifinals kung saan nila
makakaharap ang defending champions mula
sa Ma. Aurora.

THE LEAD
Possible answers:
Baler advanced to the knockout semifinals of
Summer Volleyball Tournament after defeating
San Luis 25-23, 23-25, 26-24,25-19 yesterday
afternoon at the Baler Central School Covered
Court and will next face the defending
champion, Ma. Aurora
Umabante sa semi-finals ng Summer Volleyball
Tournament ang Baler matapos pataubin sa
kanilang sagupaan ang San Luis 25-23, 23-25,
26-24,25-19 sa Baler Central School Covered
Court kahapon

MANILA, Philippines – Binura ng
defending champion na Far Eastern
University Tamaraws ang 20-point lead ng
University of the Philippines Maroons
patungo sa 63-60 panalo UAAP Season
79 men’s basketball tournament kahapon
sa Smart Araneta Coliseum.
FEU kinuha ang playoff sa semis

Paragraphs 2 and 3
Humataw si Raymar Jose ng 20 points
at 12 rebounds para pangunahan ang
ikapitong sunod panalo ng Tamaraws at
umangat sa 8-2 win-loss kartada.
Nanatili ang FEU sa ika
­lawang
puwesto sa ila
­lim ng De La Salle Green
Archers na tangan ang 10-0 card.

Paragraph 4 and 5
Natuwa naman si head coach Nash
Racela sa panalo na nagbigay sa kanila ng
playoff right para sa huling semifinal slot,
habang dahil sa pagkatalo ay bumaba sa
3-8 ang baraha ng UP.
Mabagal ang naging umpisa ng
Tamaraws kaya nalimitahan sila sa 8
puntos sa unang 10 minuto ng laro.

Paragraph 6
Ngunit kahit naiwanan sa 18-38
ay hindi nagpatinag ang tropa ni
Racela at dahil sa kanilang pasensya
at determinasyon ay naitabla nila ang
laro sa 46-46 pa
­punta sa fourth
period.

Paragraph 7
:
Sinindihan ni Jose ang 9-2 atake
at sa ilang iglap lamang ay nasa
ibabaw na ang Tamaraws, 57-48, sa
ilalim ng anim na minuto sa laro.
..

Paragraphs 8 and 9
:
Nilapit ng triple ni Jett Manuel ang
agwat sa Maroons, 60-63
Marami pa ring tsansa ang UP
para bawiin ang bentahe ngunit
kinapos sila sa bandang huli.

Paragraphs 10 and 11
Nagmintis si Paul Desi
­derio ng
triple, habang si Ma
­nuel ay hindi rin
umubra ang tira na nagbigay daan
para sa panalo ng FEU.
Si Manuel ay tumapos na may 16
points, habang may 13 si Desiderio
para sa Maroons.

FEU 63 – Jose
20, Tri­nidad 9, Arong 8, Inigo 7,
Orizu
6, Ebona 5, Tuffin 4, Comboy 2, Holmqvist
2,
Escoto 0, Dennison 0, De­nila 0, Bayquin
0
UP 60 – Manuel
16, De­siderio 13, Prado 10,
Lim
5, Harris 4, Gomez de Liano 3, Dario 3,
Moralde
2, Webb 2, Vito 2, Asilum 0, Jaboneta
0,
Romero 0
Quarterscores:
8-28; 27-36; 46-46; 63-60.