CRITIQUE-PPT ABOUT LIFE AND HOW TO CONQUER STRUGGLES

CRITIQUE-PPT ABOUT LIFE AND HOW TO CONQUER STRUGGLES

1. A CRITIQUE PAPER ON MACARAEG’s AUTOBIOGRAPHY Presented By: John Lee C. Alonsagay

2. Author’s Biography Name: John Ruzzel Macaraeg Born: May 18,2005 Siblings: Claire Macaraeg, Lady Maica Macaraeg, Mary Fate Macaraeg Education: Saniel Cruz National High School

3. Summary of the Piece According to the author he never forget the time that he experience nearly losing his life because of making bad decisions in life.

4. Category III. Summary of the Written Piece IV.1 – Quality of Content IV.2 – Sentence Structure IV.3 – Organization, Coherence and Cohesion IV.4 – Mechanics IV.5 – Word of Choice V. Summary

5. Quality of Content The author’s content was good and it gives moral lessons in life .

6. Sentence Structure The sentence structure of this piece for me, is that the author use informal words and the author did not give specific information in the whole piece. But the author freely expresses all his feelings out.

7. Organization, Coherence and Cohesion The piece was written in chronological order, then the style of the piece is informal. But the author’s piece was good.

8. Mechanics The author uses its personal life experiences. The author’s piece was good and he really put some feelings on those words.

9. Word of Choice The author’s word of choice was good and it motivates the reader, And it has a moral lesson.

10. Summary Overall, the autobiography was written in good way and it motivates the readers. I suggest that , give more specific details or information of the piece.