DAY-53-W2-imprisonment (1).ppt ielts writing

ielts writing part 2 - discuss both view

1. INTENSIVE IELTS
Writing
Task 2: discuss both views

2. Conclusion
Body 2: View 2
Body 1: View 1
Introduction
OUTLINE

3. In many countries,
imprisonment is the most
common solution to crimes.
However, some people believe
that better education will be a
more effective solution.
To what extent do you agree
or disagree?

4. INTRODUCTION
1.Opening sentence
2.Paraphrase
-Imprisonment→ prison, prison sentence
-crimes → dealing with criminals/offenders/law
breakers, the reduction of crime rates.
3.Answer question

5. 1.Topic sentence
2.Supporting ideas
-Contribute to heightening/ raising people’s awareness: gópphần
vàoviệcnângcaonhậnthứccủangườidân
-Form a civilized country/ society: hìnhthànhxãhộivănminh
-Provide vocational training: dạynghề
Secure a stable life after rehabilitation/ after reintegrating back
into society: bảođảmcuộcsốngổnđịnhsaukhiratù/ táihòa
nhậpcộngđồng
BODY 1: AGREE WITH EDUCATION

6. 1.Topic sentence
2.Supporting ideas
-Act/ Serve as a deterrent: rào cản
-Be fully aware/conscious of the serious consequences: nhận thức
được hậu quả nghiêm trọng
-A warning for would-be law breakers: lời cảnh báo những kẻ có ý
định phạm tội
-Be isolated from society: bị cách ly khỏi xã hội
-Pose no longer threat to social safety/ stability: không còn đe dọa
sự bình yên của xã hội
BODY 2: AGREE WITH IMPRISONMENT

7. To recapitulate/ To sum up/ To wrap up,
In short/ In brief/ In summary/ In conclusion,
CONCLUSION