Objectives: identify what editorial is; identify the parts and structure of an editorial; use the pointers in writing editorial; and, write a good editorial about the given issue/ news.
FACT OR BLUFF
In editorial writing, using first person point of view is not acceptable. An editorial has a byline. FACT OR BLUFF An editorial presents the stand of the staff of the publication. 3 2 1
A good introduction of an editorial contains both the news and stand of the writer. Editorial is an opinionated news story . FACT OR BLUFF A good editorial orders the readers to do certain actions relative to the issue at hand. 6 5 4
A good editorial is based on a timely news angle and discussed societal issues. Aside from opinions, facts are also considered as one of the most important elements of an editorial. FACT OR BLUFF A good editorial should have at least one argument or rebuttal. 9 8 7
Introduction What is an editorial? EDITORIAL WRITING A Review
Introduction An editorial is: an article that presents the newspaper's opinion on an issue. It can be about any topic, but is usually written about an issue that deals with our society. EDITORIAL WRITING A Review
Introduction the soul and conscience of the newspaper. an opinionated news story. EDITORIAL WRITING A Review
Introduction Parts and Structure of an Editorial EDITORIAL WRITING
ARGUMENT # 1 NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION ARGUMENT # 2 ARGUMENT # 3 EVIDENCE REBUT /COUNTER Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand or Stance
ARGUMENT # 1 NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION ARGUMENT # 2 ARGUMENT # 3 EVIDENCE REBUT /COUNTER Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand or Stance S P tatement osition INTRODUCTION
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial There can be no mistaking it. Both the video record and the official transcript provided by the Presidential Communications Office prove that President Duterte did in fact liken himself to the Nazi dictator Adolf Hitler—and said he was ready to kill three million drug addicts. - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news Sample:
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial Not at all. Both the video record and the official transcript provided by the Presidential Communications Office would not mistaken President Duterte likening himself to the Nazi dictator Adolf Hitler and saying he was ready to kill three million drug addicts. Position + Issue/ Statement of news Sample:
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial Could there be any other interpretation? Both the video record and the official transcript provided by the Presidential Communications Office prove that President Duterte did in fact liken himself to the Nazi dictator Adolf Hitler—and said he was ready to kill three million drug addicts. Position + Issue/ Statement of news Sample:
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial Barely an hour after the close of the first US presidential debate on Monday night in the United States , Republican candidate Donald Trump was back to his old tricks. At one point during the debate, Democratic candidate Hillary Clinton had prodded him on why he hadn’t released his tax returns—the only presidential aspirant in recent American history to refuse to do so. - - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial Even for the residents of Batanes —where squat stone houses attest to the province’s reputation as the storm capital of the country— Typhoon “ Ferdie ” was the strongest in recent memory. - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial Faith is on full display in the Bicol region, where the feast of Our Lady of Peñafrancia is being celebrated and concludes today with a fluvial procession on the Naga River. - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial On Sept. 11, the Official Gazette of the Philippines decided to mark the 99th birth anniversary of the late dictator Ferdinand E. Marcos, by releasing a graphic. What could possibly go wrong? As it turns out: Almost everything. - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial “Show the elder generations how to lead and help them, for they have disappointed you for so long.” ----- a self- demeaning statement of the Department of Education Secretary, Bro. Armin Luistro addressed to the thousands of young journalists in his message during the opening program of National Schools Press Conference (NSPC) 2016 on February 22. His strength of character and dynamic personality amp up his remark on the malady of the elder leaders that the young journalists can heal. Position + Issue/ Statement of news
ARGUMENT # 1 NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION ARGUMENT # 2 ARGUMENT # 3 EVIDENCE REBUT /COUNTER Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand or Stance S P E tatement osition vidence INTRODUCTION B ODY
Body Paragraph 1: In the Secretary’s message, he highlighted the role of the campus press in initiating change in the society . His strong regard for the young was evident when he chose to first meet the participants in a mini- presscon which they, themselves, facilitated. Emphasizing the great challenge entrusted to them, the Secretary urged them to do small things that have a life- long impact to the society, for making a change isn’t dependent on age, but on the will to be part of the critical mass of young leaders who are open to listen and are rooted in the communities they are serving. EVIDENCE
Body Paragraph 2: Serving the Department of Education for years, the Secretary definitely understands the young generation are endowed with both a bit of innocence and inquisitive spirit . He was even impressed with their questions which were driven from their hunger for answers to many issues that float in the mind of the common public. When he was asked about his own legacy as the Department of Education Secretary, the veteran public servant admittedly said he can’t grasp an answer to the question which he found the most difficult to answer and took him some time to think about. Humble enough, the Secretary’s inability to answer the question is a reflection that there are more to do … that there are more to change. And in this pursuit of change will take generations to keep it going. EVIDENCE
Body Paragraph 3: With the challenge at hand, he urged the young writers to look not only for their own stories but also the story of others. These are real stori es of human beings that the journalist should write and the pictures that should be taken. More so, he emphasized that young journalists should tell the older generation how to change the Philippines and the world to be better. EVIDENCE
Body Paragraph 4: Recently, the Department of Education has received a lot of critics for maneuvering a massive bureaucracy through its implementation of the K-12 Education Program with the aim of starting up radical changes and reforms in our educational system. In the midst of the promising result of the new program, the Secretary has been projecting a dynamic and a doughty stand on its implementation. He then stressed that it can only make its headway through the young generation, most importantly the campus press that are always leaders and are imbued with so much potential. EVIDENCE
ARGUMENT # 1 NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION ARGUMENT # 2 ARGUMENT # 3 EVIDENCE REBUT /COUNTER Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand or Stance S P E C S tatement osition vidence onclusion olution INTRODUCTION BODY CONCLUSION
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial There can be no mistaking it. Both the video record and the official transcript provided by the Presidential Communications Office prove that President Duterte did in fact liken himself to the Nazi dictator Adolf Hitler—and said he was ready to kill three million drug addicts. - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news Sample:
LEGS of Editorial We must all join our voices, then, to the rising chorus of protest against the President’s latest outrage. It is obscene, it is inhuman, it is un-Filipino, to want to kill three million of our own people. Happy slaughter is perdition. Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand Or stance Happy slaughter
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial Barely an hour after the close of the first US presidential debate on Monday night in the United States , Republican candidate Donald Trump was back to his old tricks. At one point during the debate, Democratic candidate Hillary Clinton had prodded him on why he hadn’t released his tax returns—the only presidential aspirant in recent American history to refuse to do so. - - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news
LEGS of Editorial This man speaks for and with the authority of the President, who, as it happens, has himself been needlessly and repeatedly entangled in controversy due to loose lips. Pres. Duterte is famously averse to anything American, and even more so to unsolicited advice on his demeanor, but perhaps he and his team can ponder on one of Clinton’s statements in the debate: “Words matter when you run for president, and they really matter when you are president.” Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand Or stance Loose Lips
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial Even for the residents of Batanes —where squat stone houses attest to the province’s reputation as the storm capital of the country—Typhoon “ Ferdie ” was the strongest in recent memory. - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news
LEGS of Editorial This is one call that can pull us together in the face of the distressing, polarizing issues—the drug-related killings, the planned burial of the dictator’s remains in the Libingan ng mga Bayani —that threaten to swamp us in a flood of despair. Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand Or stance Pulling together
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial Faith is on full display in the Bicol region, where the feast of Our Lady of Peñafrancia is being celebrated and concludes today with a fluvial procession on the Naga River. - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news
LEGS of Editorial How admirable is a sincere show of faith. It becomes more so if it informs one’s daily life and moves one to aspire to be like the one being honored and revered: virtuous and devoted, merciful and compassionate, strong and committed. Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand Or stance Show of faith
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial On Sept. 11, the Official Gazette of the Philippines decided to mark the 99th birth anniversary of the late dictator Ferdinand E. Marcos, by releasing a graphic. What could possibly go wrong? As it turns out: Almost everything. - from Philippine Daily Inquirer Position + Issue/ Statement of news
LEGS of Editorial Now why would the Official Gazette under an administration that seeks to remember the atrocities of the Americans a hundred years ago attempt to clean up the atrocities of the Marcos regime—when these happened only a generation ago? Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand Or stance Cleaning up Marcos
NEWS/ PROBLEM/ ISSUE + POSITION The HEAD of Editorial “Show the elder generations how to lead and help them, for they have disappointed you for so long.” ----- a self- demeaning statement of the Department of Education Secretary, Bro. Armin Luistro addressed to the thousands of young journalists in his message during the opening program of National Schools Press Conference (NSPC) 2016 on February 22. His strength of character and dynamic personality amp up his remark on the malady of the elder leaders that the young journalists can heal. Position + Issue/ Statement of news
One LEG of Editorial The Secretary will be leaving his seat soon as the Aquino Administration ends, and obviously, the country is facing another chapter of either failed promises or promising changes. But one thing is certain; whoever takes the government seats, there is a healing power around to influence the way elder’s lead . And that’s what Luistro’s pure cure….his prescription called YOUTH. Present Logical Alternative Recap Stand Or stance Pure Cure
Titles: Settle for less---- 2 to 3- word phrase Guilty Pleasure Tangible Pursuit Dealing the killing Manly Malady Sick of tactics Paving the Pathways Shaming Change A chance for change Untamed tongue Taming the tongue
Characteristics:
Editorial must be credible. The opinions must be backed up with facts and evidence to substantiate them.
Keep it to more or less 500 words.
Normally, the editorial is distinguished from other articles by its formal tone , although in certain instances, it can use irony, sarcasm, exaggeration, or other devices to more effectively carry across its message.
Use formal and serious Use idioms and elevated language
Idiom: jumping/ wading into the fray -- join the argument/ get into argument bending over backward - did a lot at the drop of the hat - so easily comparing apples and oranges – cannot be compared; too different
Idiom: cut corners – do something in easier way cry over a spilled milk - complain about a loss from the past. asleep at the wheel- inactive keep your eyes on – monitor closely sit on the fence - avoid making decision add fuel to the fire - cause conflict to be more intense see eye to eye – to agree with someone
Allusion: LITERARY ALLUSION: Trojan Horse Achilles heel Romeo Pinocchio Quixotic BIBLICAL ALLUSION: Good Samaritan Garden of Eden Swallowed up like Jonah Raining for 40 days and 40 nights– the story of Noah The fight between David and Goliath
Introduction EDITORIAL WRITING Good editorial: Expresses opinion without being opinionated ; Transforms without being evangelical ; Engulfs without drowning ; Motivates to action without making you dictatorial ; Enlightens without getting you dogmatic , prejudiced and egoistical ; and, should be BRIEF enough