A Reminder Regarding Usage: Agree in Person
When you write in the first person (I, we), don’t confuse your reader by switching to the “second
person” (you) or the “third person” (he, she, it, they, etc.). Similarly, when using second or
third person, don’t shift to a different point of view. For example here’s a sentence that switches
person in a confusing way:
I enrolled in a fiction-writing workshop for the winter quarter, and you have to complete three
stories, each from a different point of view.
The pronouns used in that sentence don’t agree with each other; the writer switched from first
person (I) to second person (you). Here’s the correct usage:
I enrolled in a fiction-writing workshop for the winter quarter, and I have to complete three stories,
each from a different point of view.
Summary
So remember, simply stated, first person is from the writers point of view and uses pronouns such
as “I”: I saw U2 at the Rose Bowl. Second person is directed at the reader and uses pronouns such
as “you”: You saw U2 at the Rose Bowl. Third person is told from an outside narrators point of
view and uses pronouns such as “he,” “she,” and “it”: She saw U2 at the Rose Bowl.
References
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