Journey back to earth: An adventure story

A story written by an eight years old.

1. Journey Back to Earth
Penned by:
Abdullah
Hammad

2. When they flew
away Juliana
smelled a
chocolate, when
she turned back
Annette was
eating a
chocolate bar,
Juliana sighed

3. then she saw that
they were about to
crash with a planet,
Juliana pushed the
brakes but the
brakes failed and
they crashed with
the planet.

4. “ we are stuck
again, and
because of
Juliana”. Annette
said.
“ how would I
know that the
brakes are
failed?” said
Juliana.

5. “Well, I don’t
need you.” said
Annette.

“me too,” said
Juliana.

6. “Girls,
girls, please
don’t fight”
said Gerry.

7. “You get
out of
here”, said
the girls.

8. Then Gerry went
out and walked
few kilometers.
He found a chest,
in which there was
a note.

9. On the note was
written
“when you will open
this chest you will
find a jet-pack, you
can fly for one hour
with it.”
Gerry took the
jet-pack.

10. Meanwhile,
Annette left
Juliana.

11. Juliana
thought to
make a time
machine by
destroying the
space ship. So
she started
working on it.

12. Meanwhile
Annette had
reached a
gigantic but
friendly
monster and
became friend
with him.

13. After making
the machine,
Juliana walked
out to find her
friends.
When she found
Annette, the
monster asked
Annette to say
sorry, so
Annette said
sorry to Juliana.

14. Gerry also came
there, both the
girls said ,
“ we are sorry”
at the same
time, and they
all laughed.

15. Then Juliana told
them about the
time machine and
said,
“there is a
problem, we need
flying fuel.”

“I have found it”
said Gerry.

16. When they
were saying
bye to their
monster
friend, an evil
monster
attacked
them.

17. The good
monster
kicked and
punched the
evil monster
so it ran
away.

18. They went to
the time
machine,
used the fuel
from jet-pack
and got back
to the Earth
safely.