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RambuPelaksanaan
Penerjemahan
Penerjemahan
Wajib
1.Menerjemahkansinopsis, halamansampul, isi, dan atribusi
buku.
2.Menerjemahkanonomatope.
3.Menerjemahkansetiapkalimatsesuaidengannaskahsumber
(bolehmengadaptasitapitidakbolehmenghilangkan).
4.Mengadaptasikegiatanyang adadi naskahsumberagar
sesuaidenganpembelajarandan budayadi Indonesia.
5.MenulisterjemahansesuaikaidahbahasaIndonesia. Ejaan
sesuaiKBBI, PUEBI, dan TesaurusBadan Pengembangan
dan PembinaanBahasa.
6.Atribusisesuaiformat yang disediakan.
7.Merahasiakanhasilpenerjemahan. Dilarang
mempublikasikanhasilterjemahandi media sosialmana pun.
1.Menerjemahkansinopsis, halamansampul, isi, dan atribusi
buku.
2.Menerjemahkanonomatope.
3.Menerjemahkansetiapkalimatsesuaidengannaskahsumber
(bolehmengadaptasitapitidakbolehmenghilangkan).
4.Mengadaptasikegiatanyang adadi naskahsumberagar
sesuaidenganpembelajarandan budayadi Indonesia.
5.MenulisterjemahansesuaikaidahbahasaIndonesia. Ejaan
sesuaiKBBI, PUEBI, dan TesaurusBadan Pengembangan
dan PembinaanBahasa.
6.Atribusisesuaiformat yang disediakan.
7.Merahasiakanhasilpenerjemahan. Dilarang
mempublikasikanhasilterjemahandi media sosialmana pun.
TidakBolehDilakukan
1.Menggantinama, tokoh, panggilan, tempat, tanggal,
istilahyang berkaitandengansejarah. Nama-nama
dan istilah-istilahtersebutdijelaskandengan
catatankaki.
2.Menggantinamadan istilah-istilahjikabuku
berceritatentangbudaya. Nama-namadan istilah-
istilahtersebutdijelaskandengancatatankaki.
Mitos, legenda, dan dongengtermasukdalambentuk
budaya.
3.Mengubahalurcerita.
4.Menghilangkanrima.
1.Menggantinama, tokoh, panggilan, tempat, tanggal,
istilahyang berkaitandengansejarah. Nama-nama
dan istilah-istilahtersebutdijelaskandengan
catatankaki.
2.Menggantinamadan istilah-istilahjikabuku
berceritatentangbudaya. Nama-namadan istilah-
istilahtersebutdijelaskandengancatatankaki.
Mitos, legenda, dan dongengtermasukdalambentuk
budaya.
3.Mengubahalurcerita.
4.Menghilangkanrima.
BolehDilakukan
1.Mengubahnamasapaandisesuaikandengan
budayaIndonesia untukbuku-bukuyang
menceritakankehidupansehari-hari.
2.Mengubahnamatokoh, tempat, dan tanggaljika
tidakberkaitandengansejarahataubiografi.
Penambahan CatatanKaki:
•Menambahkanpenjelasanuntukistilah-istilahyang
kurangfamiliar untukanakIndonesia.
1.Mengubahnamasapaandisesuaikandengan
budayaIndonesia untukbuku-bukuyang
menceritakankehidupansehari-hari.
2.Mengubahnamatokoh, tempat, dan tanggaljika
tidakberkaitandengansejarahataubiografi.
Penambahan CatatanKaki:
•Menambahkanpenjelasanuntukistilah-istilahyang
kurangfamiliar untukanakIndonesia.
Name : Sayidatun Nisa Sunjaya
NPM : 22113018PM
Translate Poetry
In this assignment, I will translate a poem entitled "AKU" by Chairul Anwar
Sumber Source Language Target Language
Aku Me
Kalau sampai waktuku When my time comes
Ku mau tak seorang kan merayu I don’t anyone coaxing
Tidak juga kau Not even you
Tak perlu sedu sedan itu The crying’s not needed
Aku ini binatang jalang I’m wild beast
Dari kumpulannya terbuang be outcast from the herd
Biar peluru menembus kulitku Let the bullets pierce my skin
Aku tetap meradang menerjang But I'mll keep still charginge, aflame
Luka dan bisa ku bawa berlari Wounds and poison I’ll take running
Berlari Running
Hingga hilang pedih hari Until the pain is gone
Dan aku akan kebih tidak peduli And, I don't even care
Aku mau hidup seribu tahun lagi I want to live another thousand years
Literary translation lecture resume October 6, 2022
At the literary translation lecture on October 6, 2022, translator practitioners presented their
experiences in translation. The translator practitioner named Dirga Am, we learn a lot about
the world as translator practitioners. Mr. Dirga Am already has many works that have been
translated, one of which is Salo Saddang. In the world of translation there are 6
terminologies.
NPM : 22113018PM
Translate Poetry
In this assignment, I will translate a poem entitled "AKU" by Chairul Anwar
Sumber Source Language Target Language
Aku Me
Kalau sampai waktuku When my time comes
Ku mau tak seorang kan merayu I don’t anyone coaxing
Tidak juga kau Not even you
Tak perlu sedu sedan itu The crying’s not needed
Aku ini binatang jalang I’m wild beast
Dari kumpulannya terbuang be outcast from the herd
Biar peluru menembus kulitku Let the bullets pierce my skin
Aku tetap meradang menerjang But I'mll keep still charginge, aflame
Luka dan bisa ku bawa berlari Wounds and poison I’ll take running
Berlari Running
Hingga hilang pedih hari Until the pain is gone
Dan aku akan kebih tidak peduli And, I don't even care
Aku mau hidup seribu tahun lagi I want to live another thousand years
Literary translation lecture resume October 6, 2022
At the literary translation lecture on October 6, 2022, translator practitioners presented their
experiences in translation. The translator practitioner named Dirga Am, we learn a lot about
the world as translator practitioners. Mr. Dirga Am already has many works that have been
translated, one of which is Salo Saddang. In the world of translation there are 6
terminologies.
• ST ( Sumber translation) and TT ( Target Translation)
• SL ( Sumber Language) and TL ( Target Language)
• Direct Translation
• Indirect Translation
• Sight Translation
• Translationese
Reasons Why translate literary works is..
• To be a literary Translator
• To be a writer
• To be a better reader of literary works
• Translation for pleasure
The Tools of a literary translator
• Monolingual Dictionaries
• Bilingual Dictionaries
• Search Engine
• Thesaurus in the TL
• Bilingual idiom dictionary
• Rhyme dictionary in the TL
• Spell checker for the TL
The relevant aspects of literature for a translator is
1. The linguistic aspects
2. The cultural aspects
3. The literary aspect
The Literal approach → translate according to the existing meaning, must be the same as
the writing and the intent of the source language
The liberal approach → Freely translate what is important according to the intent, and can
be modified according to conditions
• SL ( Sumber Language) and TL ( Target Language)
• Direct Translation
• Indirect Translation
• Sight Translation
• Translationese
Reasons Why translate literary works is..
• To be a literary Translator
• To be a writer
• To be a better reader of literary works
• Translation for pleasure
The Tools of a literary translator
• Monolingual Dictionaries
• Bilingual Dictionaries
• Search Engine
• Thesaurus in the TL
• Bilingual idiom dictionary
• Rhyme dictionary in the TL
• Spell checker for the TL
The relevant aspects of literature for a translator is
1. The linguistic aspects
2. The cultural aspects
3. The literary aspect
The Literal approach → translate according to the existing meaning, must be the same as
the writing and the intent of the source language
The liberal approach → Freely translate what is important according to the intent, and can
be modified according to conditions
Name : Ari Ardani
NPM : 18111099
Subject : Literary Translation
Indonesia:
Mata Hitam
Karya: WS Rendra
Dua mata hitam adalah matahari yang biru
dua mata hitam sangat kenal bahasa rindu.
Rindu bukanlah milik perempuan melulu
dan keduanya sama tahu, dan keduanya tanpa malu.
Dua mata hitam terbenam di daging yang wangi
kecantikan tanpa sutra, tanpa pelangi.
Dua mata hitam adalah rumah yang temaram
secangkir kopi sore hari dan kenangan yang terpendam
English:
Black Eyes
By: WS Rendra
Two black eyes is a blue sun
two black eyes really know the language of longing.
Longing doesn't only belong to women
and both know well, and both are shameless.
Two black eyes immersed in the fragrant flesh
beauty without silk, without rainbow.
Two black eyes is a dim house
The afternoon cup of coffee and burried memories
NPM : 18111099
Subject : Literary Translation
Indonesia:
Mata Hitam
Karya: WS Rendra
Dua mata hitam adalah matahari yang biru
dua mata hitam sangat kenal bahasa rindu.
Rindu bukanlah milik perempuan melulu
dan keduanya sama tahu, dan keduanya tanpa malu.
Dua mata hitam terbenam di daging yang wangi
kecantikan tanpa sutra, tanpa pelangi.
Dua mata hitam adalah rumah yang temaram
secangkir kopi sore hari dan kenangan yang terpendam
English:
Black Eyes
By: WS Rendra
Two black eyes is a blue sun
two black eyes really know the language of longing.
Longing doesn't only belong to women
and both know well, and both are shameless.
Two black eyes immersed in the fragrant flesh
beauty without silk, without rainbow.
Two black eyes is a dim house
The afternoon cup of coffee and burried memories
Inggris:
“When I Have Fears That I May Cease to Be,”
John Keats
"And when I feel, fair creature of an hour!
That I shall never look upon thee more,
Never have relish in the faery power
Of unreflecting love — then on the shore
Of the wide world I stand alone, and think
Till Love and Fame to nothingness do sink."
Indonesia:
"Ketika Saya Memiliki Ketakutan Bahwa Saya Mungkin Berhenti,"
John Keats
"Dan ketika saya merasa, makhluk yang adil dari satu jam!
Bahwa aku tidak akan pernah melihatmu lagi,
Tidak pernah menikmati kekuatan peri ini
Tentang cinta yang tak terpantulkan — lalu di pinggir pantai
Dari dunia luas aku berdiri sendiri, lalu berfikir
Sampai Cinta dan Ketenaran menjadi ketiadaan lalu tenggelam."
“When I Have Fears That I May Cease to Be,”
John Keats
"And when I feel, fair creature of an hour!
That I shall never look upon thee more,
Never have relish in the faery power
Of unreflecting love — then on the shore
Of the wide world I stand alone, and think
Till Love and Fame to nothingness do sink."
Indonesia:
"Ketika Saya Memiliki Ketakutan Bahwa Saya Mungkin Berhenti,"
John Keats
"Dan ketika saya merasa, makhluk yang adil dari satu jam!
Bahwa aku tidak akan pernah melihatmu lagi,
Tidak pernah menikmati kekuatan peri ini
Tentang cinta yang tak terpantulkan — lalu di pinggir pantai
Dari dunia luas aku berdiri sendiri, lalu berfikir
Sampai Cinta dan Ketenaran menjadi ketiadaan lalu tenggelam."
Indonesia - English translation
Terlelap lalu terbangun dengan pengar
Rebah hanya sekedar rutinitas
Beranjak keluar berbaur hingar bingar
Jas berdasi menatap layar jadi identitas
Dozing and rouse for an agony
Recline are completely habitual
Shifting, mingle for an irony
Suit tie on become a self-conceptual
English - Indonesia translation
I've been drowning
Falling to the place that is frightening
I've been thinking i found myself saddening
Never knew, I found it in the depths that myself stunning
Aku pernah tenggelam
Jatuh menuju tempat kelam
Kukira diriku kan terluka dalam
Tak kusangka kutemukan diriku layaknya nilam
Last meeting report
Presenter: Dirga
Date, time: Thursday, October 6
th
2022
Literary translation
Why translate literary work?
1. To be a literary translator
2. To be a writer
3. To be a better reader of literary works
4. Translation for pleasure
Note: In translating a literary work into language, it does not necessarily translate it
immediately, furthermore, we must consider how the reader can both get a reading experience
Terlelap lalu terbangun dengan pengar
Rebah hanya sekedar rutinitas
Beranjak keluar berbaur hingar bingar
Jas berdasi menatap layar jadi identitas
Dozing and rouse for an agony
Recline are completely habitual
Shifting, mingle for an irony
Suit tie on become a self-conceptual
English - Indonesia translation
I've been drowning
Falling to the place that is frightening
I've been thinking i found myself saddening
Never knew, I found it in the depths that myself stunning
Aku pernah tenggelam
Jatuh menuju tempat kelam
Kukira diriku kan terluka dalam
Tak kusangka kutemukan diriku layaknya nilam
Last meeting report
Presenter: Dirga
Date, time: Thursday, October 6
th
2022
Literary translation
Why translate literary work?
1. To be a literary translator
2. To be a writer
3. To be a better reader of literary works
4. Translation for pleasure
Note: In translating a literary work into language, it does not necessarily translate it
immediately, furthermore, we must consider how the reader can both get a reading experience
that is in accordance with the original work. This means that the translator must look at aspects
of language, social, etc. Meaning that are in accordance with the understanding of the readers
so that the text are more meaningful.
The literary aspect
For the speeding reader, paragraphs become a country the eye flies over looking for landmarks,
reference points, airports, restrooms, passages of sex.
The speeding reader guts a book the way the skillful clean fish. The gills are gone, the tail, the
scales, the fins, then the fillet slides away swiftly as though fed to a seal, and only the slow
reader, one whom those with green teeth chew through like furious worms: only the reader
whose finger falters in front of long words, who moves the lips, who dances the text, will notice
the odd crowd of images -flier, butcher, seal - which have gathered to comment on the aims
and activities of the speeding reader, perhaps like gossips at a wedding.
To the speeding reader, this jostle of images, this crazy: collision of ideas - of landing strip,
kernel, heart, guts, sex - will not be felt or even recognized, because these readers are after
what they regard as the inner core of meaning: itis the gist they want, the heart of the matter:
they want what can egually well be said in their own, other, and always fewer words: so that
the gist of this passage could be said to be: readers who read rapidIy read only for the most
generalized and stereotyped significances."
[In reading the sentence above, the reader tends to focus on how to finish and read quickly
without paying attention to the meaning and meaning of the topic of conversation above.
Readers tend to understand meaning only after they have finished reading]
of language, social, etc. Meaning that are in accordance with the understanding of the readers
so that the text are more meaningful.
The literary aspect
For the speeding reader, paragraphs become a country the eye flies over looking for landmarks,
reference points, airports, restrooms, passages of sex.
The speeding reader guts a book the way the skillful clean fish. The gills are gone, the tail, the
scales, the fins, then the fillet slides away swiftly as though fed to a seal, and only the slow
reader, one whom those with green teeth chew through like furious worms: only the reader
whose finger falters in front of long words, who moves the lips, who dances the text, will notice
the odd crowd of images -flier, butcher, seal - which have gathered to comment on the aims
and activities of the speeding reader, perhaps like gossips at a wedding.
To the speeding reader, this jostle of images, this crazy: collision of ideas - of landing strip,
kernel, heart, guts, sex - will not be felt or even recognized, because these readers are after
what they regard as the inner core of meaning: itis the gist they want, the heart of the matter:
they want what can egually well be said in their own, other, and always fewer words: so that
the gist of this passage could be said to be: readers who read rapidIy read only for the most
generalized and stereotyped significances."
[In reading the sentence above, the reader tends to focus on how to finish and read quickly
without paying attention to the meaning and meaning of the topic of conversation above.
Readers tend to understand meaning only after they have finished reading]
Attendance proof:
Name: Felissia Nofita S
SID: 18111005
Lagu Duka
Karya: WS Rendra
Iadatangtanpamengetuklalu
merangkulku
adapun ia yang licik bernama duka.
Ia bulan jingga neraka langit dadaku
adapun ia yang laknat bernama duka.
Iakerandacendanadanbunga-bunga
sutra ungu
adapun ia yang manis bernama duka.
Ia tinggal lelucon setelah ciuman panjang
adapun ia uang malang bernama duka.
Grief Song
By: WS Rendra
Hecamewithoutknockingandembraced
me
as for he who is cunning called sorrow.
Heistheorangemoonhellskyinmy
chest
As for him, the curse is called grief.
Heisasandalwoodcoffinandpurplesilk
flowers
as for the sweet one called sorrow.
He is just a joke after a long kiss
Asforthemoneyisunfortunatecalled
grief.
The Daisy follows soft the Sun
Emily Dickinson
"The daisy follows soft the sun,
And when his golden walk is done,
Sits shyly at his feet.
He, waking, finds the flower near.
'Wherefore, marauder, art thou here?'
'Because, sir, love is sweet!'”
Aster mengikuti lembut Matahari
Emily Dickinson
Bunga aster mengikuti lembut matahari,
Dan ketika perjalanan emasnya selesai,
Duduk malu-malu di kakinya.
Dia, bangun, menemukan bunga terdekat.
'Karenaitu,perampok,apakahkamuada
di sini?'
'Karena, tuan, cinta itu manis!'”
SID: 18111005
Lagu Duka
Karya: WS Rendra
Iadatangtanpamengetuklalu
merangkulku
adapun ia yang licik bernama duka.
Ia bulan jingga neraka langit dadaku
adapun ia yang laknat bernama duka.
Iakerandacendanadanbunga-bunga
sutra ungu
adapun ia yang manis bernama duka.
Ia tinggal lelucon setelah ciuman panjang
adapun ia uang malang bernama duka.
Grief Song
By: WS Rendra
Hecamewithoutknockingandembraced
me
as for he who is cunning called sorrow.
Heistheorangemoonhellskyinmy
chest
As for him, the curse is called grief.
Heisasandalwoodcoffinandpurplesilk
flowers
as for the sweet one called sorrow.
He is just a joke after a long kiss
Asforthemoneyisunfortunatecalled
grief.
The Daisy follows soft the Sun
Emily Dickinson
"The daisy follows soft the sun,
And when his golden walk is done,
Sits shyly at his feet.
He, waking, finds the flower near.
'Wherefore, marauder, art thou here?'
'Because, sir, love is sweet!'”
Aster mengikuti lembut Matahari
Emily Dickinson
Bunga aster mengikuti lembut matahari,
Dan ketika perjalanan emasnya selesai,
Duduk malu-malu di kakinya.
Dia, bangun, menemukan bunga terdekat.
'Karenaitu,perampok,apakahkamuada
di sini?'
'Karena, tuan, cinta itu manis!'”
ST TT
This evening, the sturdy Levi's
I wore every day for over a year
& which seemed to the end
in perfect condition,
suddenly tore.
How or why I don't know,
but there it was: a big rip at the crotch.
A month ago my friend Nick
walked off a racquetball court,
showered,
got into his street clothes,
& halfway home collapsed & died.
Take heed, you who read this,
& drop to your knees now & again
like the poet Christopher Smart,
& kiss the earth & be joyful,
& make much of your time,
& be kindly to everyone,
even to those who do not deserve it.
For although you may not believe
it will happen,
you too will one day be gone,
I, whose Levi's ripped at the crotch
for no reason,
assure you that such is the case.
Pass it on.
Pada pagi ini, jeans Levi’s kebanggaanku yang
selalu aku pakai setiap hari dalam kurun waktu
lebih dari setahun dan yang sepertinya
Nampak baik-baik saja [to the end], tetiba saja
robek.
Bagaimana atau apa alasannya aku pun tidak
tahu menahu,
Tapi di sana ada robekan besar di bagian
selangkangan.
Satu bulan lalu, temanku Nick pergi ke
lapangan bulu tangkis,
Mandi,
Dan memakai pakaiannya,
Dan dalam setengah perjalanan pulang lalu
kolaps dan mati.
Berhati-hatilah, untukmu yang membaca ini,
Dan berlututlah dan lagi seperti penyair
Christopher Smart,
Dan mencumbu bumi dan bergembiralah,
Dan manfaatkanlah waktumu,
Dan jadilah baik ke semua orang,
Bahkan kepada mereka yang tidak pantas
mendapatkannya.
Mungkin kamu tidak percaya akan hal yang
akan datang itu,
Suatu hari nanti kamu juga akan pergi,
Aku, yang jeans Levi’snya sobek di
selangkangan tanpa alasan,
Memberitahu kalian bahwa begitulah
ceritanya.
Lanjutkanlah pesan ini.
Commented [DA1]: What do you like about this poem?
Commented [DA2]: Why do you change it to morning?
Commented [DA3]: Why do you change it?
Commented [DA4]: “Lebih dari setahun belakangan”?
Commented [DA5]: Bentuk tidak baku. Bentuk baku:
tampak. Why?
Commented [DA6]: How about “Pulang dari gor bulu
tangkis”?
Commented [DA7]: How about “Ganti baju”?
Commented [DA8]: How about “Dalam perjalanan
pulang”?
Commented [DA9]: How about “sujud syukur”?
Commented [DA10]: How about “berbuatbaiklah
kepada”
Commented [DA11]: Why do you use mungkin? How
about “Meskipun”?
Commented [DA12]: How about “hari itu akan datang”?
This evening, the sturdy Levi's
I wore every day for over a year
& which seemed to the end
in perfect condition,
suddenly tore.
How or why I don't know,
but there it was: a big rip at the crotch.
A month ago my friend Nick
walked off a racquetball court,
showered,
got into his street clothes,
& halfway home collapsed & died.
Take heed, you who read this,
& drop to your knees now & again
like the poet Christopher Smart,
& kiss the earth & be joyful,
& make much of your time,
& be kindly to everyone,
even to those who do not deserve it.
For although you may not believe
it will happen,
you too will one day be gone,
I, whose Levi's ripped at the crotch
for no reason,
assure you that such is the case.
Pass it on.
Pada pagi ini, jeans Levi’s kebanggaanku yang
selalu aku pakai setiap hari dalam kurun waktu
lebih dari setahun dan yang sepertinya
Nampak baik-baik saja [to the end], tetiba saja
robek.
Bagaimana atau apa alasannya aku pun tidak
tahu menahu,
Tapi di sana ada robekan besar di bagian
selangkangan.
Satu bulan lalu, temanku Nick pergi ke
lapangan bulu tangkis,
Mandi,
Dan memakai pakaiannya,
Dan dalam setengah perjalanan pulang lalu
kolaps dan mati.
Berhati-hatilah, untukmu yang membaca ini,
Dan berlututlah dan lagi seperti penyair
Christopher Smart,
Dan mencumbu bumi dan bergembiralah,
Dan manfaatkanlah waktumu,
Dan jadilah baik ke semua orang,
Bahkan kepada mereka yang tidak pantas
mendapatkannya.
Mungkin kamu tidak percaya akan hal yang
akan datang itu,
Suatu hari nanti kamu juga akan pergi,
Aku, yang jeans Levi’snya sobek di
selangkangan tanpa alasan,
Memberitahu kalian bahwa begitulah
ceritanya.
Lanjutkanlah pesan ini.
Commented [DA1]: What do you like about this poem?
Commented [DA2]: Why do you change it to morning?
Commented [DA3]: Why do you change it?
Commented [DA4]: “Lebih dari setahun belakangan”?
Commented [DA5]: Bentuk tidak baku. Bentuk baku:
tampak. Why?
Commented [DA6]: How about “Pulang dari gor bulu
tangkis”?
Commented [DA7]: How about “Ganti baju”?
Commented [DA8]: How about “Dalam perjalanan
pulang”?
Commented [DA9]: How about “sujud syukur”?
Commented [DA10]: How about “berbuatbaiklah
kepada”
Commented [DA11]: Why do you use mungkin? How
about “Meskipun”?
Commented [DA12]: How about “hari itu akan datang”?
Nama : Amel Lia Cahyani
Class : SS20A
NPM : 20111021
Build Love
When meeting you, don't know why this heart becomes restless
A Heart that is tightly closed and in the end it opens
There is a problem what heart, tell me why you are becoming nervous
Are you in love ask thoughts
Oh no this heart has found its couple
It's not about falling in love it's waking up in love
When two hearts have met why don't we become a couple
Don't you think of falling in love but let's build love
Don't be like water and oil don't stir
Do not be like fire and water that are not united who are always emotional
Be like a pair of shoes that are always together
That's why our love can be built with two hearts that are never emotional
Class : SS20A
NPM : 20111021
Build Love
When meeting you, don't know why this heart becomes restless
A Heart that is tightly closed and in the end it opens
There is a problem what heart, tell me why you are becoming nervous
Are you in love ask thoughts
Oh no this heart has found its couple
It's not about falling in love it's waking up in love
When two hearts have met why don't we become a couple
Don't you think of falling in love but let's build love
Don't be like water and oil don't stir
Do not be like fire and water that are not united who are always emotional
Be like a pair of shoes that are always together
That's why our love can be built with two hearts that are never emotional
Bangun Cinta
Saat bertemu denganmu, entah kenapa hati ini menjadi resah
Hati yang tertutup rapat dan akhirnya terbuka
Ada masalah apa hati, katakan padaku mengapa kamu menjadi gugup
Apakah kamu sedang jatuh cinta, tanyakan pikiran
Oh tidak, hati ini telah menemukan pasangannya
Ini bukan tentang jatuh cinta itu bangun cinta
Ketika dua hati telah bertemu mengapa kita tidak menjadi pasangan
Jangan berpikir untuk jatuh cinta tapi mari kita membangun cinta
Jangan seperti air dan minyak jangan diaduk
Jangan seperti api dan air yang tidak menyatu yang selalu emosional
Jadilah seperti sepasang sepatu yang selalu bersama
Karena itulah cinta kita bisa dibangun dengan dua hati yang tidak pernah
emosional
Saat bertemu denganmu, entah kenapa hati ini menjadi resah
Hati yang tertutup rapat dan akhirnya terbuka
Ada masalah apa hati, katakan padaku mengapa kamu menjadi gugup
Apakah kamu sedang jatuh cinta, tanyakan pikiran
Oh tidak, hati ini telah menemukan pasangannya
Ini bukan tentang jatuh cinta itu bangun cinta
Ketika dua hati telah bertemu mengapa kita tidak menjadi pasangan
Jangan berpikir untuk jatuh cinta tapi mari kita membangun cinta
Jangan seperti air dan minyak jangan diaduk
Jangan seperti api dan air yang tidak menyatu yang selalu emosional
Jadilah seperti sepasang sepatu yang selalu bersama
Karena itulah cinta kita bisa dibangun dengan dua hati yang tidak pernah
emosional
Report
penerjemah ia menerjemahkan teks-teks dari media buku, subtitel film, berita,
artikel, dan lain-lain. Penerjemah ini menerjemahkan dari bahasa sumber ke
bahasa sasaran dalam waktu yang relatif tidak singkat. Sementara interpreter
atau dalam bahasa Indonesia dikenal sebagai juru bahasa adalah seorang
penerjemah bahasa yang mengalihkan bahasa lisan dari bahasa satu ke bahasa
yang lain secara langsung dalam waktu yang sama (saat itu juga).
Terminopogies
- ST ( source text, target text)
- TL,SL
- Direct translation: penerjemah paham source text
- indirect translation : tidak menerjemahkan langsung dari dari source language.
For example : Japananese, English, Indonesia.
- sight translation : menerjemahkan secara langsung. Itu artinya sekali membaca
langsung menterjemahkam.
- translationese : bahasa terjemahan yang tidak baku.
Translate literary work : 1. untuk membantu karya sastra untuk di definisikqn ke
bahasa lain
2. To be a literary translator
3. To be a writer
seseorang yang melakukan pekerjaan dalam dunia tulis menulis
Alat untuk menjdai penerjemah seperti : kamus monolingual,bilingual, google
atau search engine,bilingual idiom dictionary,ryhmedictionary in the TL, spell
checker for the TL
Jenis-jenis aspek yang ada dari literature di translator? Bahasa aspek atau
linguistic aspect (Semantic), Literary dan the cultural.
Dan untuk menjadi penerjemah juga kita harus memiliki ilmu bahasa yang bagus.
penerjemah ia menerjemahkan teks-teks dari media buku, subtitel film, berita,
artikel, dan lain-lain. Penerjemah ini menerjemahkan dari bahasa sumber ke
bahasa sasaran dalam waktu yang relatif tidak singkat. Sementara interpreter
atau dalam bahasa Indonesia dikenal sebagai juru bahasa adalah seorang
penerjemah bahasa yang mengalihkan bahasa lisan dari bahasa satu ke bahasa
yang lain secara langsung dalam waktu yang sama (saat itu juga).
Terminopogies
- ST ( source text, target text)
- TL,SL
- Direct translation: penerjemah paham source text
- indirect translation : tidak menerjemahkan langsung dari dari source language.
For example : Japananese, English, Indonesia.
- sight translation : menerjemahkan secara langsung. Itu artinya sekali membaca
langsung menterjemahkam.
- translationese : bahasa terjemahan yang tidak baku.
Translate literary work : 1. untuk membantu karya sastra untuk di definisikqn ke
bahasa lain
2. To be a literary translator
3. To be a writer
seseorang yang melakukan pekerjaan dalam dunia tulis menulis
Alat untuk menjdai penerjemah seperti : kamus monolingual,bilingual, google
atau search engine,bilingual idiom dictionary,ryhmedictionary in the TL, spell
checker for the TL
Jenis-jenis aspek yang ada dari literature di translator? Bahasa aspek atau
linguistic aspect (Semantic), Literary dan the cultural.
Dan untuk menjadi penerjemah juga kita harus memiliki ilmu bahasa yang bagus.
Name : Antonius Andi Wibowo
NPM : 2011013
1. Translate Indonesia poetry to English
Derita
Tak tahu sampai kapan
Jalan yang ku tempuh ini sampai di ujung
Lelah... Aku merasa lelah
Dengan jalan yang aku tapaki
Mungkin memang harus ku kemudikan dengan baik
Agar sampai di tujuan sesuai keinginan
Tapi, bisa kah diriku?
Bisakah kemudi itu berkolaborasi dengan pikiranku ini?
Ataukah kemudi itu yang bisa membawa ku ke jalan yang benar?
Tuhan... Ada kah seseorang yang Kau siapkan untuk ku
Untuk bersama menopang beban yang ku pikul ini
Agar mau ku bagi kesedihan ku
Mau ku bagi derita ku
Tak tahu apa lagi yang bisa ku lakukan
Aku
Wanita yang penuh dosa
Yang berharap Kau mau menunjukkan
Kuasa-Mu itu untuk ku
Commented [DA1]: Is this your poem? What do you like
about it?
Commented [DA2]: Is the speaker walking or driving?
NPM : 2011013
1. Translate Indonesia poetry to English
Derita
Tak tahu sampai kapan
Jalan yang ku tempuh ini sampai di ujung
Lelah... Aku merasa lelah
Dengan jalan yang aku tapaki
Mungkin memang harus ku kemudikan dengan baik
Agar sampai di tujuan sesuai keinginan
Tapi, bisa kah diriku?
Bisakah kemudi itu berkolaborasi dengan pikiranku ini?
Ataukah kemudi itu yang bisa membawa ku ke jalan yang benar?
Tuhan... Ada kah seseorang yang Kau siapkan untuk ku
Untuk bersama menopang beban yang ku pikul ini
Agar mau ku bagi kesedihan ku
Mau ku bagi derita ku
Tak tahu apa lagi yang bisa ku lakukan
Aku
Wanita yang penuh dosa
Yang berharap Kau mau menunjukkan
Kuasa-Mu itu untuk ku
Commented [DA1]: Is this your poem? What do you like
about it?
Commented [DA2]: Is the speaker walking or driving?
Translated to English
Anguish
Don’t know till when
This road I'm on has reached the end
Tired... I feel tired
With the path that I walk
Maybe I should drive well
In order to arrive at the destination as desired
But, can I?
Can the steering wheel collaborate with my thoughts?
Or is it Can the steering wheel that can lead me to the right path?
God... Is there someone you’ve prepared for me
To jointly support share this burden that I carry
So that I want to share my sadness
I want to share my anguish
Don't know what else I can do
Me
A sSinful woman
Who hopes you want to show
Your mighty, for to me
Commented [DA3]: Will reach?
Commented [DA4]: How about “Can my mind stirs the
wheel?”
Commented [DA5]: Someone I can share my sadness
with
Someone I can share my anguish with
Anguish
Don’t know till when
This road I'm on has reached the end
Tired... I feel tired
With the path that I walk
Maybe I should drive well
In order to arrive at the destination as desired
But, can I?
Can the steering wheel collaborate with my thoughts?
Or is it Can the steering wheel that can lead me to the right path?
God... Is there someone you’ve prepared for me
To jointly support share this burden that I carry
So that I want to share my sadness
I want to share my anguish
Don't know what else I can do
Me
A sSinful woman
Who hopes you want to show
Your mighty, for to me
Commented [DA3]: Will reach?
Commented [DA4]: How about “Can my mind stirs the
wheel?”
Commented [DA5]: Someone I can share my sadness
with
Someone I can share my anguish with
2. Translate English poetry to Bahasa
The Red Wheelbarrow
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
Commented [DA6]: What do you like about this poem?
The Red Wheelbarrow
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
Commented [DA6]: What do you like about this poem?
Translated to Bahasa
Gerobak Merah
sangat tergantung
pada
roda merah
gerobak dorong
berkaca-kaca karena hujan
air
disamping di samping ayam
putih
Commented [DA7]: How about “banyak yang”
Commented [DA8]: How about berkilau-kilau?
Commented [DA9]: How about “air
Hujan?”
Gerobak Merah
sangat tergantung
pada
roda merah
gerobak dorong
berkaca-kaca karena hujan
air
disamping di samping ayam
putih
Commented [DA7]: How about “banyak yang”
Commented [DA8]: How about berkilau-kilau?
Commented [DA9]: How about “air
Hujan?”
3. Report of last meeting
Translate literary
Is study to translate literature
Types of literary translation services
• Translation of novels, short stories, novels.
• Translation of film texts, songs, poems, ballads.
• Translation of literary and critical articles.
• Translation of advertising materials with literary content.
• Translation of magazines and articles.
• Translation of other texts.
Why translate literary works?
• To be a literary translator (can be paid)
• To be a writer
• To be a better reader of literary works
• Translation for pleasure (“the itch to translate”)
Tools to help you doing literary translate.
1. Monolingual dictionaries
2. Bilingual dictionaries
3. Search engine
4. Thesaurus in the TL
5. Bilingual idiom dictionary
6. Rhyme dictionary in the TL
7. Spell checker for the TL
Or
1. Google Traduction
2. K Pencarian - KBBI Daring
3. Oxford Learner's Dictionaries | Find definitions, translation...
4. Cambridge Dictionary | English Dictionary, Translations &...
5. Tesaurus Tematis Bahasa Indonesia
Translate literary
Is study to translate literature
Types of literary translation services
• Translation of novels, short stories, novels.
• Translation of film texts, songs, poems, ballads.
• Translation of literary and critical articles.
• Translation of advertising materials with literary content.
• Translation of magazines and articles.
• Translation of other texts.
Why translate literary works?
• To be a literary translator (can be paid)
• To be a writer
• To be a better reader of literary works
• Translation for pleasure (“the itch to translate”)
Tools to help you doing literary translate.
1. Monolingual dictionaries
2. Bilingual dictionaries
3. Search engine
4. Thesaurus in the TL
5. Bilingual idiom dictionary
6. Rhyme dictionary in the TL
7. Spell checker for the TL
Or
1. Google Traduction
2. K Pencarian - KBBI Daring
3. Oxford Learner's Dictionaries | Find definitions, translation...
4. Cambridge Dictionary | English Dictionary, Translations &...
5. Tesaurus Tematis Bahasa Indonesia
6. Rima Kata | Kamus Rima
7. Idioms and phrases
8. Google Translate
9. Idioms and phrases
10. Awan (Indonesia)
11. 85 Contoh Idiom dalam Bahasa Inggris dan Artinya
12. Daftar Tiruan Bunyi Terlengkap (Onomatope)
13. Google Docs
14. Translate - StoryWeaver
7. Idioms and phrases
8. Google Translate
9. Idioms and phrases
10. Awan (Indonesia)
11. 85 Contoh Idiom dalam Bahasa Inggris dan Artinya
12. Daftar Tiruan Bunyi Terlengkap (Onomatope)
13. Google Docs
14. Translate - StoryWeaver
Name : Dimas Ardian Febriansyah
NPM : 20111026
Poem
Indonesia translate to English
Topeng Dibalik Persahabatan
Kami berteman sejak sebelumnya
Aku mengenalmu seperti kamu mengenalku
Apalah arti persahabatan jika ada pengkhianatan
Beraninya kau menusukku dari belakang
The Mask Behind Friendship
We were friends since before
I know you as you know me
What is the meaning of friendship if there is betrayal
How dare you stab me in the back
English translate to Indonesia
Shadow
I’m just a human being
I was only dreaming
But now, I get the feeling
I can reach my dream which I was dreaming
Bayangan
Saya hanya seorang manusia
Aku hanya bermimpi
Tapi sekarang, saya dapat merasakan
Saya dapat mencapai impian saya yang saya impikan
Hallo sir. I do apologize for the task of create a report, I didn’t create it. In the previous meeting I didn’t
join the zoom and I don’t know about the material that already delivered because in that day I got an
accident that my motorcycle was stolen by the thief in the same time. I was panic at that condition and I
didn't realize if there was a class. If you don’t mind, can I get additional assignments to make up my
previous meeting sir? Hopefully I can get the chance. Thank you sir.
NPM : 20111026
Poem
Indonesia translate to English
Topeng Dibalik Persahabatan
Kami berteman sejak sebelumnya
Aku mengenalmu seperti kamu mengenalku
Apalah arti persahabatan jika ada pengkhianatan
Beraninya kau menusukku dari belakang
The Mask Behind Friendship
We were friends since before
I know you as you know me
What is the meaning of friendship if there is betrayal
How dare you stab me in the back
English translate to Indonesia
Shadow
I’m just a human being
I was only dreaming
But now, I get the feeling
I can reach my dream which I was dreaming
Bayangan
Saya hanya seorang manusia
Aku hanya bermimpi
Tapi sekarang, saya dapat merasakan
Saya dapat mencapai impian saya yang saya impikan
Hallo sir. I do apologize for the task of create a report, I didn’t create it. In the previous meeting I didn’t
join the zoom and I don’t know about the material that already delivered because in that day I got an
accident that my motorcycle was stolen by the thief in the same time. I was panic at that condition and I
didn't realize if there was a class. If you don’t mind, can I get additional assignments to make up my
previous meeting sir? Hopefully I can get the chance. Thank you sir.
NAME : ELMA TIYANA
NPM : 22113003PM
A. 1. Poem Indonesia translate to English
Kata adalah nada dan cara paling sederhana untuk mencapaimu
Lewat sebuah senja di langitku yang hangat
Kulihat awan menembus senyummu
Yang lebam di ingatanku
Di puisi ini, akan kau temukan air mata
Dan senyuman dalam satu kaca
Jika suatu hari puisi ku hilang
Temukan aku dalam suara hening yang bisa kau dengar
Layaknya sebuah kebahagiaan dan kepingan kenangan
Aku akan menyimpanmu di tempat terbaik dalam hatiku
Karenanya aku tidak perlu tanda titik untuk mencintaimu
Bagiku kau seperti Selaparang, kota tua yang tak mati-mati
words are the tone and the simplest way to reach you
through a twilight in my warm sky
I see the clouds pierce you your smile
That is bruised in my memory
In this poem, you will find tears
And smiles in one glass
In If one day my poetry is lost
Find me in the silent voice you can hear
Like happiness and memories
I will keep you in the best place in my heart
So, I don’t need a dot to love you
To me, you are like Selaparang, an old city that doesn’t die
2. Poem English translate to Indonesia
I never knew about happiness.
I didn’t think dreams came true.
I couldn’t really believe in love.
Until I finally with you.
Aku tidak pernah tau tentang kebahagiaan.
Aku tidak pernah berpikir mimpi akan terkabul.
Aku tidak benar-benar percaya akan cinta.
Sampai akhirnya aku bertemu denganmu.
B. A report about the last meeting of Literary Translation
1. Literary Translation
In terminologies there are:
• ST, TT (dalam Bahasa Indonesia TSu, TSa)
• SL, TL (dalam Bahasa Indonesia BSa, BSu)
Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this? What do you
like most about it?
Commented [DA2]: Check out
“Sonnet 18” by William Shakespeare
Sapardi Djoko Damono (?)
Commented [DA3]: How about “slices of memory” or
“fragments of memory”?
Commented [DA4]: How about adapting it to the target
audience?
For example, Jerusalem? Or Athens?
NPM : 22113003PM
A. 1. Poem Indonesia translate to English
Kata adalah nada dan cara paling sederhana untuk mencapaimu
Lewat sebuah senja di langitku yang hangat
Kulihat awan menembus senyummu
Yang lebam di ingatanku
Di puisi ini, akan kau temukan air mata
Dan senyuman dalam satu kaca
Jika suatu hari puisi ku hilang
Temukan aku dalam suara hening yang bisa kau dengar
Layaknya sebuah kebahagiaan dan kepingan kenangan
Aku akan menyimpanmu di tempat terbaik dalam hatiku
Karenanya aku tidak perlu tanda titik untuk mencintaimu
Bagiku kau seperti Selaparang, kota tua yang tak mati-mati
words are the tone and the simplest way to reach you
through a twilight in my warm sky
I see the clouds pierce you your smile
That is bruised in my memory
In this poem, you will find tears
And smiles in one glass
In If one day my poetry is lost
Find me in the silent voice you can hear
Like happiness and memories
I will keep you in the best place in my heart
So, I don’t need a dot to love you
To me, you are like Selaparang, an old city that doesn’t die
2. Poem English translate to Indonesia
I never knew about happiness.
I didn’t think dreams came true.
I couldn’t really believe in love.
Until I finally with you.
Aku tidak pernah tau tentang kebahagiaan.
Aku tidak pernah berpikir mimpi akan terkabul.
Aku tidak benar-benar percaya akan cinta.
Sampai akhirnya aku bertemu denganmu.
B. A report about the last meeting of Literary Translation
1. Literary Translation
In terminologies there are:
• ST, TT (dalam Bahasa Indonesia TSu, TSa)
• SL, TL (dalam Bahasa Indonesia BSa, BSu)
Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this? What do you
like most about it?
Commented [DA2]: Check out
“Sonnet 18” by William Shakespeare
Sapardi Djoko Damono (?)
Commented [DA3]: How about “slices of memory” or
“fragments of memory”?
Commented [DA4]: How about adapting it to the target
audience?
For example, Jerusalem? Or Athens?
• Direct translation
• Indirect translation
• Sight translation
• Translationese
“Translation is then first of all making better known what deserves to be better
known – because it is improving, deepening, exalting; because it is an indispensable
legacy from the past; because it is a contribution to knowledge, sacred or other. In a
more secular register, translation was also thought to bring a benefit to the translator:
translating was a valuable cognitive – and ethical – workout.”
The tolls of a (literary) translator:
a. Monolingual dictionaries
b. Bilingual dictionaries
c. Search engine
d. Thesaurus in the TL
e. Bilingual idiom dictionary
f. Rhyme dictionary in the TL
g. Spell checker for the TL
The relevant aspect of literature for a translator:
a. The linguistic aspect
b. The literary aspect
c. The cultural aspect
• Indirect translation
• Sight translation
• Translationese
“Translation is then first of all making better known what deserves to be better
known – because it is improving, deepening, exalting; because it is an indispensable
legacy from the past; because it is a contribution to knowledge, sacred or other. In a
more secular register, translation was also thought to bring a benefit to the translator:
translating was a valuable cognitive – and ethical – workout.”
The tolls of a (literary) translator:
a. Monolingual dictionaries
b. Bilingual dictionaries
c. Search engine
d. Thesaurus in the TL
e. Bilingual idiom dictionary
f. Rhyme dictionary in the TL
g. Spell checker for the TL
The relevant aspect of literature for a translator:
a. The linguistic aspect
b. The literary aspect
c. The cultural aspect
Ester Yulvia Mutiara
20111008
SS20
Literary Translation
A. English to Indonesia
I was not enjoy
With the current situation
Until my eyes sees
I got wet dress
Aku tidak menikmati
Dengan situasi saat ini
Sampai tak terasa
Baju ku basah karena air mata
B. Indonesia to English
Apakah disana
Kau masih mengingat ku?
Apakah kau lupa
Akan kenangan kita selama ini
Did you still
Remember about me?
Did you forget me
With all of our memories
SUMMARY
Speaker : kak Dirga
Date, time: Thursday, October 6th 2022 Literary translation
Why translate literary work? To be a literary translator, to be a writer, to be a better reader of
literary works. Translation for pleasure, with note In translating a literary work into language,
it does not necessarily translate it immediately, furthermore, we must consider how the reader
can both get a reading experience that is in accordance with the original work. This means
that the translator must look at aspects of language, social, etc. Meaning that are in
accordance with the understanding of the readers so that the text are more meaningful.
The literary aspect. For the speeding reader, paragraphs become a country the eye flies over
looking for landmarks, reference points, airports, restrooms, passages of sex.
The speeding reader guts a book the way the skillful clean fish. The gills are gone, the tail,
the scales, the fins, then the fillet slides away swiftly as though fed to a seal, and only the
slow reader, one whom those with green teeth chew through like furious worms: only the
reader whose finger falters in front of long words, who moves the lips, who dances the text,
will notice the odd crowd of images -flier, butcher, seal - which have gathered to comment on
the aims and activities of the speeding reader, perhaps like gossips at a wedding. To the
20111008
SS20
Literary Translation
A. English to Indonesia
I was not enjoy
With the current situation
Until my eyes sees
I got wet dress
Aku tidak menikmati
Dengan situasi saat ini
Sampai tak terasa
Baju ku basah karena air mata
B. Indonesia to English
Apakah disana
Kau masih mengingat ku?
Apakah kau lupa
Akan kenangan kita selama ini
Did you still
Remember about me?
Did you forget me
With all of our memories
SUMMARY
Speaker : kak Dirga
Date, time: Thursday, October 6th 2022 Literary translation
Why translate literary work? To be a literary translator, to be a writer, to be a better reader of
literary works. Translation for pleasure, with note In translating a literary work into language,
it does not necessarily translate it immediately, furthermore, we must consider how the reader
can both get a reading experience that is in accordance with the original work. This means
that the translator must look at aspects of language, social, etc. Meaning that are in
accordance with the understanding of the readers so that the text are more meaningful.
The literary aspect. For the speeding reader, paragraphs become a country the eye flies over
looking for landmarks, reference points, airports, restrooms, passages of sex.
The speeding reader guts a book the way the skillful clean fish. The gills are gone, the tail,
the scales, the fins, then the fillet slides away swiftly as though fed to a seal, and only the
slow reader, one whom those with green teeth chew through like furious worms: only the
reader whose finger falters in front of long words, who moves the lips, who dances the text,
will notice the odd crowd of images -flier, butcher, seal - which have gathered to comment on
the aims and activities of the speeding reader, perhaps like gossips at a wedding. To the
speeding reader, this jostle of images, this crazy: collision of ideas - of landing strip, kernel,
heart, guts, sex - will not be felt or even recognized, because these readers are after what they
regard as the inner core of meaning: itis the gist they want, the heart of the matter: they want
what can egually well be said in their own, other, and always fewer words: so that the gist of
this passage could be said to be: readers who read rapidIy read only for the most generalized
and stereotyped significances.
heart, guts, sex - will not be felt or even recognized, because these readers are after what they
regard as the inner core of meaning: itis the gist they want, the heart of the matter: they want
what can egually well be said in their own, other, and always fewer words: so that the gist of
this passage could be said to be: readers who read rapidIy read only for the most generalized
and stereotyped significances.
Name : Farizha Audi Syaharani
Npm : 20111032
Class : SS 20A
• The Change
You don't realize how beautiful that day is
How beautiful the waves are roaring
Invading the beach
As if carrying longing that drifts with you
Title?
Kamu tidak menyadari betapa indahnya hari itu
Betapa indahnya ombak yang menderu
Menyerang pantai
Seakan membawa rindu yang hanyut bersamamu
• Semua Hal indah
Setiap bunga kecil yang terbuka
Setiap burung kecil yang bernyanyi
Membuat warna mereka bersinar
Membuat sayap kecil mereka
Title?
Each little flower that opens
Each little bird that sings
Made their glowing colors
Made their tiny wings
Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this? What do you
like about it?
Commented [DA2]: How about “Menghantam”?
Commented [DA3]: Has the addressee died?
Commented [DA4]: What does this line mean?
Commented [DA5]: How about “blooms”?
Commented [DA6]: How about “its colors glow?”
Npm : 20111032
Class : SS 20A
• The Change
You don't realize how beautiful that day is
How beautiful the waves are roaring
Invading the beach
As if carrying longing that drifts with you
Title?
Kamu tidak menyadari betapa indahnya hari itu
Betapa indahnya ombak yang menderu
Menyerang pantai
Seakan membawa rindu yang hanyut bersamamu
• Semua Hal indah
Setiap bunga kecil yang terbuka
Setiap burung kecil yang bernyanyi
Membuat warna mereka bersinar
Membuat sayap kecil mereka
Title?
Each little flower that opens
Each little bird that sings
Made their glowing colors
Made their tiny wings
Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this? What do you
like about it?
Commented [DA2]: How about “Menghantam”?
Commented [DA3]: Has the addressee died?
Commented [DA4]: What does this line mean?
Commented [DA5]: How about “blooms”?
Commented [DA6]: How about “its colors glow?”
Name : Fitri Sutiarsih
Npm : 20111028
SS 20 A
My First Love
When I first met you
I feel it for you
This is very delightfu
But it is impossible for me to love you
Because your attitude is as cool as the ice
It hit me…
The lantern of hope has begin, Its impossible for me
This time I fell in love
Who is wrong here
For you who I admire
Actually I don’t want to hope with you
But your sweet smile make me like you
Although in silence I was waiting for you.
Cinta pertama saya
Saat pertama kali bertemu denganmu
Aku merasakannya untukmu
Ini sangat menyenangkan
Tapi tidak mungkin bagiku untuk mencintaimu
Npm : 20111028
SS 20 A
My First Love
When I first met you
I feel it for you
This is very delightfu
But it is impossible for me to love you
Because your attitude is as cool as the ice
It hit me…
The lantern of hope has begin, Its impossible for me
This time I fell in love
Who is wrong here
For you who I admire
Actually I don’t want to hope with you
But your sweet smile make me like you
Although in silence I was waiting for you.
Cinta pertama saya
Saat pertama kali bertemu denganmu
Aku merasakannya untukmu
Ini sangat menyenangkan
Tapi tidak mungkin bagiku untuk mencintaimu
Karena sikapmu sedingin es
Itu memukul saya…
Lentera harapan telah dimulai, Tidak mungkin bagiku
Kali ini aku jatuh cinta
siapa yang salah disini?
Untukmu yang aku kagumi
Sebenarnya aku tidak ingin berharap denganmu
Tapi senyum manismu membuatku menyukaimu, Meski dalam diam aku menunggumu.
Summary about the last meeting
Terminopogies
- ST ( source text, target text)
- TL,SL
- Direct translation: penerjemah paham source text
- indirect translation : tidak menerjemahkan langsung dari dari source language.
For example : Japananese, English, Indonesia.
- sight translation : menerjemahkan secara langsung. Itu artinya sekali membaca langsung
menterjemahkam.
- translationese : bahasa terjemahan yang tidak baku.
Translate literary work :
• untuk membantu karya sastra untuk di definisikqn ke bahasa lain
• To be a literary translator
• To be a writer
Itu memukul saya…
Lentera harapan telah dimulai, Tidak mungkin bagiku
Kali ini aku jatuh cinta
siapa yang salah disini?
Untukmu yang aku kagumi
Sebenarnya aku tidak ingin berharap denganmu
Tapi senyum manismu membuatku menyukaimu, Meski dalam diam aku menunggumu.
Summary about the last meeting
Terminopogies
- ST ( source text, target text)
- TL,SL
- Direct translation: penerjemah paham source text
- indirect translation : tidak menerjemahkan langsung dari dari source language.
For example : Japananese, English, Indonesia.
- sight translation : menerjemahkan secara langsung. Itu artinya sekali membaca langsung
menterjemahkam.
- translationese : bahasa terjemahan yang tidak baku.
Translate literary work :
• untuk membantu karya sastra untuk di definisikqn ke bahasa lain
• To be a literary translator
• To be a writer
Alat untuk menjdai penerjemah seperti : kamus monolingual,bilingual, google atau search
engine,bilingual idiom dictionary,ryhmedictionary in the TL, spell checker for the TL
Jenis-jenis aspek yang ada dari literature di translator? Bahasa aspek atau linguistic aspect
(Semantic), Literary dan the cultural
engine,bilingual idiom dictionary,ryhmedictionary in the TL, spell checker for the TL
Jenis-jenis aspek yang ada dari literature di translator? Bahasa aspek atau linguistic aspect
(Semantic), Literary dan the cultural
Name: Gloria Calista Halley
NPM: 20111004
Dead
Whether you feel scared or relieved
Heard that death was coming any minute
The arrival of death is like
The clock that doesn't work anymore
Sometimes people are afraid to die
Because they are not ready to lose
Which is called worldly pleasure
Or afraid to feel pain
Sometimes people are happy too
That death is coming any minute
Because you don't feel pain anymore
Death is a word
Which refers to from the end
Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this? What do you
like most about it?
NPM: 20111004
Dead
Whether you feel scared or relieved
Heard that death was coming any minute
The arrival of death is like
The clock that doesn't work anymore
Sometimes people are afraid to die
Because they are not ready to lose
Which is called worldly pleasure
Or afraid to feel pain
Sometimes people are happy too
That death is coming any minute
Because you don't feel pain anymore
Death is a word
Which refers to from the end
Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this? What do you
like most about it?
Of the word and finished
That's how they feel and think about dead
Kematian
Apakah kamu merasa takut atau lega
Pada saat mendengar kematian akan datang kapan saja
Kedatangan kematian seperti
Jam yang berfungsi lagi
Terkadang orang takut akan mati
Karena mereka belom belum siap untuk kehilangan
Yang disebut kesenangan duniawi
Atau takut merasakan kesakitan
Terkadang juga orang senang
Kematian akan datang kapan saja
Karena kamu tidak akan merasakan kesakitan lagi
Kematian adalah sebuah kata
Yang meruncu merujuk pada kata berakhir
Atau kata selesai
Jadi itulah yang mereka rasakan dengantentang kematian dan arti dari kematian itu sendiri
Commented [DA2]: How about “Entah”?
Commented [DA3]: How about “Datangnya”?
Commented [DA4]: Why did you change it into its
opposite?
Formatted: English (United States)
Commented [DA5]: Try translating a rhymed poem and
preserving the rhyme. Just for exercise.
That's how they feel and think about dead
Kematian
Apakah kamu merasa takut atau lega
Pada saat mendengar kematian akan datang kapan saja
Kedatangan kematian seperti
Jam yang berfungsi lagi
Terkadang orang takut akan mati
Karena mereka belom belum siap untuk kehilangan
Yang disebut kesenangan duniawi
Atau takut merasakan kesakitan
Terkadang juga orang senang
Kematian akan datang kapan saja
Karena kamu tidak akan merasakan kesakitan lagi
Kematian adalah sebuah kata
Yang meruncu merujuk pada kata berakhir
Atau kata selesai
Jadi itulah yang mereka rasakan dengantentang kematian dan arti dari kematian itu sendiri
Commented [DA2]: How about “Entah”?
Commented [DA3]: How about “Datangnya”?
Commented [DA4]: Why did you change it into its
opposite?
Formatted: English (United States)
Commented [DA5]: Try translating a rhymed poem and
preserving the rhyme. Just for exercise.
Why Translate Literary Works
• To be a better reader of Literary Works
• To be a writer
• To be a better reader of Literary Works
• To be a writer
Jonathan Susanto
20111005 – SS20A
Literary Translation
Topics:
# Make 2 poems, Indonesia translate to English and English translate to Indonesia, each poem
there is 1 stanza and each stanza is from 4 rows.
# Create a report about the last meeting of Literary Translation.
Bahasa Indonesia
Catatan Terima Kasih untuk Mentor
Rasanya seperti menang lotre
Tapi tanpa memenangkan hadiah uang
Apakah sudah bulan Desember?
Soalnya Santa memberiku sesuatu yang akan kuingat
Ku menghargai kehadiranmu
Ku kagum dengan semangatmu
Terima kasih banyak guruku
Untuk membantuku membangun masa depanku
A Thank You Note to a Mentor
It felt like winning a lottery
But without cash on me
Is it already December?
Cause Santa gimme something I’ll remember
I appreciate your presence
I admire your passion
Muchas gracias my teacher
To help me build my future
My Unsung Hero
From day to night, you give us light
Always bring something to share, something we never care
Burned by ego, we wish you to go
But what if you didn’t exist? Oh it’s such a bad twist
20111005 – SS20A
Literary Translation
Topics:
# Make 2 poems, Indonesia translate to English and English translate to Indonesia, each poem
there is 1 stanza and each stanza is from 4 rows.
# Create a report about the last meeting of Literary Translation.
Bahasa Indonesia
Catatan Terima Kasih untuk Mentor
Rasanya seperti menang lotre
Tapi tanpa memenangkan hadiah uang
Apakah sudah bulan Desember?
Soalnya Santa memberiku sesuatu yang akan kuingat
Ku menghargai kehadiranmu
Ku kagum dengan semangatmu
Terima kasih banyak guruku
Untuk membantuku membangun masa depanku
A Thank You Note to a Mentor
It felt like winning a lottery
But without cash on me
Is it already December?
Cause Santa gimme something I’ll remember
I appreciate your presence
I admire your passion
Muchas gracias my teacher
To help me build my future
My Unsung Hero
From day to night, you give us light
Always bring something to share, something we never care
Burned by ego, we wish you to go
But what if you didn’t exist? Oh it’s such a bad twist
Thank you, thank you for helping us
Because of you, we have a solid truss
Thank you for what you always do,
My Unsung Hero
Pahlawan Tanpa Tanda Jasa
Dari pagi hingga malam, kau selalu memberi kami cahaya
Selalu membawa sesuatu untuk dibagi, sesuatu yang kami tidak pernah peduli
Terbakar oleh ego, kami berharap kau pergi
Namun apa jadinya kalau kau tidak ada? Oh tidak pernah terbayangkan
Terima kasih, terima kasih atas bantuanmu
Karenamu kami memiliki pondasi yang kokoh
Terima kasih atas segala yang kau lakukan,
Pahlawan Tanda Tanpa Jasa
Report about last meetings:
What are the tools of a literary translator?
1. Monolingual dictionaries
2. Bilingual dictionaries
3. Search engine
4. Thesaurus in the TL
5. Bilingual idiom dictionary
6. Rhyme dictionary in the TL
7. Spell checker for the TL
this is attendance screenshot
Because of you, we have a solid truss
Thank you for what you always do,
My Unsung Hero
Pahlawan Tanpa Tanda Jasa
Dari pagi hingga malam, kau selalu memberi kami cahaya
Selalu membawa sesuatu untuk dibagi, sesuatu yang kami tidak pernah peduli
Terbakar oleh ego, kami berharap kau pergi
Namun apa jadinya kalau kau tidak ada? Oh tidak pernah terbayangkan
Terima kasih, terima kasih atas bantuanmu
Karenamu kami memiliki pondasi yang kokoh
Terima kasih atas segala yang kau lakukan,
Pahlawan Tanda Tanpa Jasa
Report about last meetings:
What are the tools of a literary translator?
1. Monolingual dictionaries
2. Bilingual dictionaries
3. Search engine
4. Thesaurus in the TL
5. Bilingual idiom dictionary
6. Rhyme dictionary in the TL
7. Spell checker for the TL
this is attendance screenshot
Name : Farikha Alifia Aquina
NPM : 22113017PM
Course : Literary Translation (SS 20 A)
POEM : English – Bahasa
English :
A Tear And A Smile
I would not exchange the sorrows of my heart
For the joys of the multitude.
And I would not have the tears that sadness makes
To flow from my every part turn into laughter.
I would that my life remain a tear and a smile.
A tear to purify my heart and give me understanding
Of life's secrets and hidden things.
A smile to draw me nigh to the sons of my kind and
To be a symbol of my glorification of the gods.
A tear to unite me with those of broken heart;
A smile to be a sign of my joy in existence.
I would rather that I died in yearning and longing than that I live weary and despairing.
I want the hunger for love and beauty to be in the
Depths of my spirit,for I have seen those who are
Satisfied the most wretched of people.
I have heard the sigh of those in yearning and longing, and it is sweeter than the sweetest melody.
With evening's coming the flower folds her petals
And sleeps, embracing her longing.
At morning's approach she opens her lips to meet
The sun's kiss.
The life of a flower is longing and fulfilment.
A tear and a smile.
The waters of the sea become vapor and rise and come
Together and are a cloud.
And the cloud floats above the hills and valleys
Until it meets the gentle breeze, then falls weeping
To the fields and joins with brooks and rivers to return to the sea, its home.
Commented [DA1]: What do you like most about it?
NPM : 22113017PM
Course : Literary Translation (SS 20 A)
POEM : English – Bahasa
English :
A Tear And A Smile
I would not exchange the sorrows of my heart
For the joys of the multitude.
And I would not have the tears that sadness makes
To flow from my every part turn into laughter.
I would that my life remain a tear and a smile.
A tear to purify my heart and give me understanding
Of life's secrets and hidden things.
A smile to draw me nigh to the sons of my kind and
To be a symbol of my glorification of the gods.
A tear to unite me with those of broken heart;
A smile to be a sign of my joy in existence.
I would rather that I died in yearning and longing than that I live weary and despairing.
I want the hunger for love and beauty to be in the
Depths of my spirit,for I have seen those who are
Satisfied the most wretched of people.
I have heard the sigh of those in yearning and longing, and it is sweeter than the sweetest melody.
With evening's coming the flower folds her petals
And sleeps, embracing her longing.
At morning's approach she opens her lips to meet
The sun's kiss.
The life of a flower is longing and fulfilment.
A tear and a smile.
The waters of the sea become vapor and rise and come
Together and are a cloud.
And the cloud floats above the hills and valleys
Until it meets the gentle breeze, then falls weeping
To the fields and joins with brooks and rivers to return to the sea, its home.
Commented [DA1]: What do you like most about it?
The life of clouds is a parting and a meeting.
A tear and a smile.
And so does the spirit become separated from
The greater spirit to move in the world of matter
And pass as a cloud over the mountain of sorrow
And the plains of joy to meet the breeze of death
And return whence it came.
To the ocean of Love and Beauty----to God.
Khalil Gibran
Bahasa :
Air Mata dan Senyuman
Saya tidak akan menukar kesedihan hati saya
Demi kebahagiaan orang banyak.
Dan saya tidak akan memiliki mengubah air mata yang dibuatditeteskan oleh kesedihan
Mengalir dari setiap bagiankuseluruh tubuhku berubah menjadi tawa.
Aku ingin hidupku tetap menjadi air mata dan senyuman.
Air mata untuk menyucikan hatiku dan memberiku pengertian
Tentang rahasia hidup dan hal-hal yang tersembunyi.
Senyum untuk menarikku ke dekat putra-putraku dan
Untuk menjadi simbol pemuliaan saya dari para dewa.
Air mata untuk menyatukan saya dengan mereka yang patah hati;
Senyuman menjadi tanda kegembiraanku dalam hidup.
Lebih baik aku mati dalam segala kerinduan daripada hidup dalam keletihan dan keputusasaan.
Saya ingin rasa lapar akan cinta dan keindahan ada di dalam
Kedalaman jiwaku, karena aku telah melihat mereka yang ada
Memuaskan orang yang paling celaka.
Saya telah mendengar desahan mereka dalamsetiap kerinduan, dan itu lebih manis dari melodi yang
paling manis.
Dengan datangnya malam, bunga melipat kelopaknya
Dan tidur, memeluk kerinduannya.
Saat mendekati pagi dia membuka bibirnya untuk bertemu
Ciuman dari matahari.
Commented [DA2]: Why did you choose to use “Saya”?
Commented [DA3]: How about
“Aku tidak akan menukar kesedihan hatiku
dengan kebahagiaan orang banyak.”
Commented [DA4]: Why did you switch from saya to ku?
Commented [DA5]: I feel that you are too literal.
Commented [DA6]: How about “mendekat ke putra-putri
manusia”?
Commented [DA7]: How about “relung”
Commented [DA8]: How about “karena aku melihat
mereka yang merasa puas adalah orang yang paling celaka”
Commented [DA9]: How about “Saya telah mendengar
desahan para perindu, desahan yang lebih manis dari
melodi yang paling manis”?
A tear and a smile.
And so does the spirit become separated from
The greater spirit to move in the world of matter
And pass as a cloud over the mountain of sorrow
And the plains of joy to meet the breeze of death
And return whence it came.
To the ocean of Love and Beauty----to God.
Khalil Gibran
Bahasa :
Air Mata dan Senyuman
Saya tidak akan menukar kesedihan hati saya
Demi kebahagiaan orang banyak.
Dan saya tidak akan memiliki mengubah air mata yang dibuatditeteskan oleh kesedihan
Mengalir dari setiap bagiankuseluruh tubuhku berubah menjadi tawa.
Aku ingin hidupku tetap menjadi air mata dan senyuman.
Air mata untuk menyucikan hatiku dan memberiku pengertian
Tentang rahasia hidup dan hal-hal yang tersembunyi.
Senyum untuk menarikku ke dekat putra-putraku dan
Untuk menjadi simbol pemuliaan saya dari para dewa.
Air mata untuk menyatukan saya dengan mereka yang patah hati;
Senyuman menjadi tanda kegembiraanku dalam hidup.
Lebih baik aku mati dalam segala kerinduan daripada hidup dalam keletihan dan keputusasaan.
Saya ingin rasa lapar akan cinta dan keindahan ada di dalam
Kedalaman jiwaku, karena aku telah melihat mereka yang ada
Memuaskan orang yang paling celaka.
Saya telah mendengar desahan mereka dalamsetiap kerinduan, dan itu lebih manis dari melodi yang
paling manis.
Dengan datangnya malam, bunga melipat kelopaknya
Dan tidur, memeluk kerinduannya.
Saat mendekati pagi dia membuka bibirnya untuk bertemu
Ciuman dari matahari.
Commented [DA2]: Why did you choose to use “Saya”?
Commented [DA3]: How about
“Aku tidak akan menukar kesedihan hatiku
dengan kebahagiaan orang banyak.”
Commented [DA4]: Why did you switch from saya to ku?
Commented [DA5]: I feel that you are too literal.
Commented [DA6]: How about “mendekat ke putra-putri
manusia”?
Commented [DA7]: How about “relung”
Commented [DA8]: How about “karena aku melihat
mereka yang merasa puas adalah orang yang paling celaka”
Commented [DA9]: How about “Saya telah mendengar
desahan para perindu, desahan yang lebih manis dari
melodi yang paling manis”?
Kehidupan bunga adalah kerinduan dan pemenuhan.
Sebuah air mata dan senyuman.
Air laut menjadi uap lalu naik dan datang
Bersama dan menjadi awan.
Dan awan mengapung di atas bukit dan lembah
Sampai bertemu angin sepoi-sepoi, lalu jatuh menangis
Ke ladang dan bergabung dengan anak sungai dan sungai untuk kembali ke laut, rumahnya.
Kehidupan awan adalah perpisahan dan pertemuan.
Sebuah air mata dan senyuman.
Dan begitu juga roh menjadi terpisah dari
Semangat yang lebih besar untuk bergerak di dunia penuh urusan
Dan berlalu seperti awan di atas gunung kesedihan
Dan dataran sukacita untuk bertemu angin kematian
Dan kembali dari mana asalnya.
Ke lautan Cinta dan Keindahan untuk Tuhan.
Khalil Gibran
Sebuah air mata dan senyuman.
Air laut menjadi uap lalu naik dan datang
Bersama dan menjadi awan.
Dan awan mengapung di atas bukit dan lembah
Sampai bertemu angin sepoi-sepoi, lalu jatuh menangis
Ke ladang dan bergabung dengan anak sungai dan sungai untuk kembali ke laut, rumahnya.
Kehidupan awan adalah perpisahan dan pertemuan.
Sebuah air mata dan senyuman.
Dan begitu juga roh menjadi terpisah dari
Semangat yang lebih besar untuk bergerak di dunia penuh urusan
Dan berlalu seperti awan di atas gunung kesedihan
Dan dataran sukacita untuk bertemu angin kematian
Dan kembali dari mana asalnya.
Ke lautan Cinta dan Keindahan untuk Tuhan.
Khalil Gibran
PUISI : Bahasa – English
Bahasa :
Sarjana
Bu, yang aku takutkan
Ladang-ladang yang kau gadaikan
Ditukar sia-sia oleh gelar sarjana ini
Tahun-tahun tak pernah benar-benar ku isi
Beras pinjamanmu itu kujadikan racun
Membakar tubuhku sendiri
Lalai akan janji lalai akan mimpi
Orang-orang pintar sudah terlalu banyak
Yang merasa lebih pintar lebih banyak lagi
Aku memilih jalan menulis puisi
Kukira ini bisa membeli nasi
Dan sebuah pulau
Serta alat pencakau risau
Bu, jika aku tidak bekerja di kantor berita
Doakanlah aku terhindar dari penyebar dilema
Biar nasi yang kumakan ini, sarjana yang kupegang ini
Tidak benar-benar membuatku seperti
Orang-orang yang hidup namun tak berarti
Doakan aku tidak menggigiti kulit di tubuhku sendiri
Boy Candra
English :
Bachelor
Mom, what I'm afraid of is that
The fields that you pawned
Exchanged Come tofor nothing by for this bachelor's degree
The years I never really filled
I turned your borrowed rice into poison
Burning my own body
Neglect of promises, neglect of dreams
There are too many smart people already
Those who feel smarter are even more
Commented [DA10]: ?
Commented [DA11]: How about “The Graduate”
Bachelor means something else.
Formatted: English (United States)
Commented [DA12]: How about “Neglecting promises,
neglecting dreams”?
Bahasa :
Sarjana
Bu, yang aku takutkan
Ladang-ladang yang kau gadaikan
Ditukar sia-sia oleh gelar sarjana ini
Tahun-tahun tak pernah benar-benar ku isi
Beras pinjamanmu itu kujadikan racun
Membakar tubuhku sendiri
Lalai akan janji lalai akan mimpi
Orang-orang pintar sudah terlalu banyak
Yang merasa lebih pintar lebih banyak lagi
Aku memilih jalan menulis puisi
Kukira ini bisa membeli nasi
Dan sebuah pulau
Serta alat pencakau risau
Bu, jika aku tidak bekerja di kantor berita
Doakanlah aku terhindar dari penyebar dilema
Biar nasi yang kumakan ini, sarjana yang kupegang ini
Tidak benar-benar membuatku seperti
Orang-orang yang hidup namun tak berarti
Doakan aku tidak menggigiti kulit di tubuhku sendiri
Boy Candra
English :
Bachelor
Mom, what I'm afraid of is that
The fields that you pawned
Exchanged Come tofor nothing by for this bachelor's degree
The years I never really filled
I turned your borrowed rice into poison
Burning my own body
Neglect of promises, neglect of dreams
There are too many smart people already
Those who feel smarter are even more
Commented [DA10]: ?
Commented [DA11]: How about “The Graduate”
Bachelor means something else.
Formatted: English (United States)
Commented [DA12]: How about “Neglecting promises,
neglecting dreams”?
I chose the path of writing poetry
I thought this could buy rice
And an island
As well as a worrying tool
Mom, if I don't work at the news agency
Pray for me to avoid spreading dilemmas
Let this rice I eat, this scholar diploma I hold
Doesn't really make me like
People who are alive but meaningless
Pray I don't bite the skin on my own body
Boy Candra
Commented [DA13]: How about “that I will not be a X”?
Commented [DA14]: How about “useless” or
How about turning the whole line into
The living deads
I thought this could buy rice
And an island
As well as a worrying tool
Mom, if I don't work at the news agency
Pray for me to avoid spreading dilemmas
Let this rice I eat, this scholar diploma I hold
Doesn't really make me like
People who are alive but meaningless
Pray I don't bite the skin on my own body
Boy Candra
Commented [DA13]: How about “that I will not be a X”?
Commented [DA14]: How about “useless” or
How about turning the whole line into
The living deads
LAST MEETING REPORT FOR LITERARY TRANSLATION COURSE
At the last meeting, we learn about the translation of literary works both in the form of poetry and others.
Learn about language approaches that can be used to replace words that do not have the right meaning.
At the last meeting, we learn about the translation of literary works both in the form of poetry and others.
Learn about language approaches that can be used to replace words that do not have the right meaning.
Name: Nadiya Noviyanti
NPM: 22113020PM
Where the Sidewalk Ends by Shel Silverstein
There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind
Dimana Trotoar Berakhir oleh Shel Silverstein
Ada tempat di mana trotoar berakhir
Dan sebelum jalan dimulai,
Dan di sana rerumputan tumbuh lembut dan putih,
Dan di sana matahari membakar merah terang,
Dan di sana burung bulan beristirahat dari penerbangannya
Untuk mendinginkan dalam angin pepermin
PADA SUATU HARI NANTI
Karya : Supardi Djoko Damono
Pada suatu hari nanti,
Jasadku tak akan ada lagi,
Tapi dalam bait-bait sajak ini,
Kau tak akan kurelakan sendiri.
ONE DAY LATER by: Sapardi Djoko Damono
One day,
My body would no longer exist,
But in these stanzas,
I would not let you to be alone.
NPM: 22113020PM
Where the Sidewalk Ends by Shel Silverstein
There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind
Dimana Trotoar Berakhir oleh Shel Silverstein
Ada tempat di mana trotoar berakhir
Dan sebelum jalan dimulai,
Dan di sana rerumputan tumbuh lembut dan putih,
Dan di sana matahari membakar merah terang,
Dan di sana burung bulan beristirahat dari penerbangannya
Untuk mendinginkan dalam angin pepermin
PADA SUATU HARI NANTI
Karya : Supardi Djoko Damono
Pada suatu hari nanti,
Jasadku tak akan ada lagi,
Tapi dalam bait-bait sajak ini,
Kau tak akan kurelakan sendiri.
ONE DAY LATER by: Sapardi Djoko Damono
One day,
My body would no longer exist,
But in these stanzas,
I would not let you to be alone.
Name : Candra Mustika
NPM :22113001PM
1. From the results of yesterday's presentation of the material. I got several points.Before
discussing it more broadly, let's talk about literature.Literature is a written text that
contains written works of an author that can be used as a reference and guide for readers.
One form of literary work is poetry.There are several aspects that need to be considered
by translators when interpreting a poem. The following aspects can be used as a reference
for interpreting a poem.
a. The linguistic Aspect .It looks like a conversion of a gripe, into a text in another
language without loss of meaning and preserving equivalence. The task of
linguistic theory is to build a translation process, in the sense of converting the
text in one language into text on the other. This can be seen from the structure of
the language.
b. The culture aspect.
In addition, there are several tools that can be used for translators. This tool can
also make it easier for them to translate according to their respective needs.there are
several tools that we can use when translating such as monolingual dictionaries, Bilingual
Dictionaries, search engine (Google ), Theasaures in TL, Bilingual Idiom dictionary,
Rhytme dictionary in the TL, spell checker fOR the TL. Besides that, there are also
several benefits that we can feel when we try to translate both from the translator and the
reader. One of the performances of this literay translation is for the writers themselves.
Besides they need a lot of reading as a reference, he also has to reproduce knowledge to
improvise their knowledge related to Literay Translation. Not only that, Literay
Translation is also very impactful for readers, namely conveying information or
providing them with current information.
2. Still I Rise - Maya Angelou
You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twisted lies,
You may trod me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I’ll rise.
Does my sassiness upset you?
NPM :22113001PM
1. From the results of yesterday's presentation of the material. I got several points.Before
discussing it more broadly, let's talk about literature.Literature is a written text that
contains written works of an author that can be used as a reference and guide for readers.
One form of literary work is poetry.There are several aspects that need to be considered
by translators when interpreting a poem. The following aspects can be used as a reference
for interpreting a poem.
a. The linguistic Aspect .It looks like a conversion of a gripe, into a text in another
language without loss of meaning and preserving equivalence. The task of
linguistic theory is to build a translation process, in the sense of converting the
text in one language into text on the other. This can be seen from the structure of
the language.
b. The culture aspect.
In addition, there are several tools that can be used for translators. This tool can
also make it easier for them to translate according to their respective needs.there are
several tools that we can use when translating such as monolingual dictionaries, Bilingual
Dictionaries, search engine (Google ), Theasaures in TL, Bilingual Idiom dictionary,
Rhytme dictionary in the TL, spell checker fOR the TL. Besides that, there are also
several benefits that we can feel when we try to translate both from the translator and the
reader. One of the performances of this literay translation is for the writers themselves.
Besides they need a lot of reading as a reference, he also has to reproduce knowledge to
improvise their knowledge related to Literay Translation. Not only that, Literay
Translation is also very impactful for readers, namely conveying information or
providing them with current information.
2. Still I Rise - Maya Angelou
You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twisted lies,
You may trod me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I’ll rise.
Does my sassiness upset you?
Why are you beset with gloom?
’ Cause I walk like I’ve got oil wells
Pumping in my living room.
Artinya
Aku Tetap bangkit
Kamu boleh menulis namaku dalam sejarah
Dengan kebohonganmu yang pahit dan terpelintir,
Kau mungkin menginjakku di tanah yang sangat kotor
Tapi tetap saja, seperti debu, aku akan bangkit.
Apakah kelancanganku membuatmu kesal?
Mengapa Kau dilanda kesuraman?
Karena aku berjalan seperti aku punya sumur minyak
Memompa di ruang tamuku.
This is my grief. That land,
My home, I have never seen;
No traveller tells of it,
However far he has been.
And could I discover it,
I fear my happiness there,
Or my pain, might be dreams of return
Here, to these things that were.
By : Edward Thomas
The meaning
Commented [DA1]: How about “omong kosongmu”?
Commented [DA2]: How about “bisa saja menindasku di
antara sol sepatu dan tanah berlumpur”?
Commented [DA3]: How about “dilingkupi” atau
“diselimuti”?
Commented [DA4]: How about adapting it to “tambang
emas”?
“Memompa” becomes “berbongkah-bongkah”
’ Cause I walk like I’ve got oil wells
Pumping in my living room.
Artinya
Aku Tetap bangkit
Kamu boleh menulis namaku dalam sejarah
Dengan kebohonganmu yang pahit dan terpelintir,
Kau mungkin menginjakku di tanah yang sangat kotor
Tapi tetap saja, seperti debu, aku akan bangkit.
Apakah kelancanganku membuatmu kesal?
Mengapa Kau dilanda kesuraman?
Karena aku berjalan seperti aku punya sumur minyak
Memompa di ruang tamuku.
This is my grief. That land,
My home, I have never seen;
No traveller tells of it,
However far he has been.
And could I discover it,
I fear my happiness there,
Or my pain, might be dreams of return
Here, to these things that were.
By : Edward Thomas
The meaning
Commented [DA1]: How about “omong kosongmu”?
Commented [DA2]: How about “bisa saja menindasku di
antara sol sepatu dan tanah berlumpur”?
Commented [DA3]: How about “dilingkupi” atau
“diselimuti”?
Commented [DA4]: How about adapting it to “tambang
emas”?
“Memompa” becomes “berbongkah-bongkah”
Ini adalah kesedihanku. Tanah itu
Rumah saya, yang saya belum pernah saya melihat.
Tidak ada terveller yang menceritakannya
Sejauh apapun dDia mengembara.
Dan bisakah saya menemukannya?
Saya takut khawatir akan kebahagiaan saya ada di sana.
Atau rasa sakitku, mungkin mimpi untuk kembali
Ke tanah ini, Untuk hal itu.
Commented [DA5]: Why do you switch from “ku” to
“saya”?
Commented [DA6]: Pengelana?
Commented [DA7]: Saya takut
Commented [DA8]: How about “ke keadaan semula”?
Rumah saya, yang saya belum pernah saya melihat.
Tidak ada terveller yang menceritakannya
Sejauh apapun dDia mengembara.
Dan bisakah saya menemukannya?
Saya takut khawatir akan kebahagiaan saya ada di sana.
Atau rasa sakitku, mungkin mimpi untuk kembali
Ke tanah ini, Untuk hal itu.
Commented [DA5]: Why do you switch from “ku” to
“saya”?
Commented [DA6]: Pengelana?
Commented [DA7]: Saya takut
Commented [DA8]: How about “ke keadaan semula”?
Name: Meta Nopasiandi
Npm: 22113002PM
Pull Your Troubles
By Barbara Vance
At night before you sleep, my dears,
You must reach deep inside
And pull your troubles out your ears
Wherein they like to hide.
A trouble is the kind of thing,
It’s very often true,
That bothers you more than the soul
Who passed it on to you.
Literal Translation:
Tarik Masalah Mu
Di malam hari sebelum kau tidur, sayang ku sayangku,
Kau harus meraih jauh ke dalam
Dan menarik masalah mumasalahmu keluar ke luar telinga mu
Dimana Tempat mereka suka untuk bersembunyi
Sebuah masalah adalah jenis hal
Ini sangat sering benar
Itu menganggu mu lebih dari jiwa
Siapa meninggalkan itu di atas untuk mu
Liberal Translation:
Hempaskanlah Semua Masalahmu
Ketika malam sebelum kau tertidur, sayangku.
Capai jauh secara mendalam
Dan hempaskanlah semua masalahmu
Ketika orang-orang suka menyembunyikannya
Masalah semacam itu
Sangat sering terjadi
Yang menganggumu melebihi jiwa
Orang-orang yang membuat mu bedarada berada dalam masalah.
Commented [DA1]: What do you like most about this
poem?
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Npm: 22113002PM
Pull Your Troubles
By Barbara Vance
At night before you sleep, my dears,
You must reach deep inside
And pull your troubles out your ears
Wherein they like to hide.
A trouble is the kind of thing,
It’s very often true,
That bothers you more than the soul
Who passed it on to you.
Literal Translation:
Tarik Masalah Mu
Di malam hari sebelum kau tidur, sayang ku sayangku,
Kau harus meraih jauh ke dalam
Dan menarik masalah mumasalahmu keluar ke luar telinga mu
Dimana Tempat mereka suka untuk bersembunyi
Sebuah masalah adalah jenis hal
Ini sangat sering benar
Itu menganggu mu lebih dari jiwa
Siapa meninggalkan itu di atas untuk mu
Liberal Translation:
Hempaskanlah Semua Masalahmu
Ketika malam sebelum kau tertidur, sayangku.
Capai jauh secara mendalam
Dan hempaskanlah semua masalahmu
Ketika orang-orang suka menyembunyikannya
Masalah semacam itu
Sangat sering terjadi
Yang menganggumu melebihi jiwa
Orang-orang yang membuat mu bedarada berada dalam masalah.
Commented [DA1]: What do you like most about this
poem?
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Love-Hate
By: Nikita Gill
I don’t hate you, I love you.
But loving you is killing me.
So this is goodbye
even if I don’t want to be.
Literal Translation:
Cinta-Benci
Aku tidak membencimu, aku mencintaimu.
Tapi, mencintaimu adalah membunuhku.
Jadi ini adalah selamat tinggal
Bahkan jika aku tidak menginginkanya.
Liberal Translation:
Cinta dan Benci
Aku mencintaimu bukan membecimu.
Tetapi cinta ini membunuhku.
Saatnya kita harus berpisahanberpisah
meskipun aku tidak menginginkan ini terjadi.
The Summary of last week’s meeting
We talked about the terminologies about ST and TT (TSu and TSa in bahasa), SL and TL
(BSa and BSu in bahasa). Direct translation which is the translator knows and understand the
language used and translate it from one language to another. Meanwhile indirect translation is
the translation does not translate directly from the original text. Sight translation is translate only
by reading past of the text. And, translationese is translation language or unnatural translation.
We also talked abou why translate literary works, because some people want to be
literary translator, to be a writer, to be a better reader of literary works, and to be translation for
pleasure it means some people will itch to translate. The tools of a literary translator such as;
monolingual dictionaries, bilingual dictionaries, search engine, spell checker for the TL,
thesaurus in TL, bilingual idiom dictionary, and rhyme dictionary in the TL.
And last but not least we talked about the literal and liberal approach which is literal
translation is the rendering of a text from one language to another one word at a time without
considering the meaning of the text as a whole. And liberal translation is translating of a text in
such a way that it reproduces the general meaning of the original text without considering word
to word meaning.
Commented [DA2]: Nice. Geisha!
By: Nikita Gill
I don’t hate you, I love you.
But loving you is killing me.
So this is goodbye
even if I don’t want to be.
Literal Translation:
Cinta-Benci
Aku tidak membencimu, aku mencintaimu.
Tapi, mencintaimu adalah membunuhku.
Jadi ini adalah selamat tinggal
Bahkan jika aku tidak menginginkanya.
Liberal Translation:
Cinta dan Benci
Aku mencintaimu bukan membecimu.
Tetapi cinta ini membunuhku.
Saatnya kita harus berpisahanberpisah
meskipun aku tidak menginginkan ini terjadi.
The Summary of last week’s meeting
We talked about the terminologies about ST and TT (TSu and TSa in bahasa), SL and TL
(BSa and BSu in bahasa). Direct translation which is the translator knows and understand the
language used and translate it from one language to another. Meanwhile indirect translation is
the translation does not translate directly from the original text. Sight translation is translate only
by reading past of the text. And, translationese is translation language or unnatural translation.
We also talked abou why translate literary works, because some people want to be
literary translator, to be a writer, to be a better reader of literary works, and to be translation for
pleasure it means some people will itch to translate. The tools of a literary translator such as;
monolingual dictionaries, bilingual dictionaries, search engine, spell checker for the TL,
thesaurus in TL, bilingual idiom dictionary, and rhyme dictionary in the TL.
And last but not least we talked about the literal and liberal approach which is literal
translation is the rendering of a text from one language to another one word at a time without
considering the meaning of the text as a whole. And liberal translation is translating of a text in
such a way that it reproduces the general meaning of the original text without considering word
to word meaning.
Commented [DA2]: Nice. Geisha!
Name : Nova Nur Rohmah
NPM : 20111036
Class : SS 20A
My earth is old
His cries are inaudible but heartbreaking
Humans who are aware of signs but still ignore
The feeling of disappointment that is very slashing because of being injured in the sharp blade of a
machete
my earth still provides its resources for living
His stomach is behind for the benefit of humans
Abundant resources just give it away
The wood that used to be abundant
Now I can't even find a big tree in the city way
Disaster is a sign of extreme disappointment
The hot lava that comes out of his stop becomes his wrath
Humans are still oblivious to the warning
As if he didn't pay attention to his natural warning
The peak of his anger destroys everything around
Remind the people of their mistakes
My earth is no longer able to bear its burden alone
My earth tells its problems through nature's cries
Translation
Bumiku sudah tua
NPM : 20111036
Class : SS 20A
My earth is old
His cries are inaudible but heartbreaking
Humans who are aware of signs but still ignore
The feeling of disappointment that is very slashing because of being injured in the sharp blade of a
machete
my earth still provides its resources for living
His stomach is behind for the benefit of humans
Abundant resources just give it away
The wood that used to be abundant
Now I can't even find a big tree in the city way
Disaster is a sign of extreme disappointment
The hot lava that comes out of his stop becomes his wrath
Humans are still oblivious to the warning
As if he didn't pay attention to his natural warning
The peak of his anger destroys everything around
Remind the people of their mistakes
My earth is no longer able to bear its burden alone
My earth tells its problems through nature's cries
Translation
Bumiku sudah tua
Rintihan tangisnya tak terdengar tetapi memilukan
Manusia yang sadar akan pertanda namun tetap mengabaikan
Rasa kecewa yang teramat menyayat karena terluka di hujam tajam nya parang
bumiku tetap memberikan sumber dayanya untuk kehidupan
Perutnya di belak untuk kepentingan manusia
Sumber daya yang melimpah diberikannya begitu saja
Kayu yang dahulu melimpah ruah
sekarang sebatang pohon besar di kota pun tak di temukan nya
Bencana menjadi tanda kecewanya yang teramat kepada manusia
Lahar panas yang keluar dari persinggahan nya menjadi murkanya
Manusia masih lengah akan peringatannya
Seolah tak menghiraukan teguran alamnya
Puncak marahnya meluluhlantahkan apa yang ada di sekitarnya
Menyadarkan manusia akan kekhilafan nya
Bumiku sudah tidak mampu menahan bebannya sendirian
Bumiku menceritakan masalahnya lewat tangisan alam
Summary
• ST, TT (Source Text, Target text)
• TL,SL
• Direct translation: Menerjemahkan secara langsung dari Bahasa pertama
• Indirect Translation: tidak menerjemahkan secara langsung dari source language/Bahasa
pertama
Ex: Japanesh-English-Indonesia
• Sight translation: menerjemahkan secara langsung (membaca lalu langsung menerjemahkan)
• Translationese: Bahasa terjemahan(tidak baku/kasar)
Why translation literary work?
1. Membantu karya sastra agar dapat di mengerti menggunakan Bahasa lain
2. Membantu penerjemah (valuable & ethical work out)
3. To be a literary translation
4. To be a writer
Manusia yang sadar akan pertanda namun tetap mengabaikan
Rasa kecewa yang teramat menyayat karena terluka di hujam tajam nya parang
bumiku tetap memberikan sumber dayanya untuk kehidupan
Perutnya di belak untuk kepentingan manusia
Sumber daya yang melimpah diberikannya begitu saja
Kayu yang dahulu melimpah ruah
sekarang sebatang pohon besar di kota pun tak di temukan nya
Bencana menjadi tanda kecewanya yang teramat kepada manusia
Lahar panas yang keluar dari persinggahan nya menjadi murkanya
Manusia masih lengah akan peringatannya
Seolah tak menghiraukan teguran alamnya
Puncak marahnya meluluhlantahkan apa yang ada di sekitarnya
Menyadarkan manusia akan kekhilafan nya
Bumiku sudah tidak mampu menahan bebannya sendirian
Bumiku menceritakan masalahnya lewat tangisan alam
Summary
• ST, TT (Source Text, Target text)
• TL,SL
• Direct translation: Menerjemahkan secara langsung dari Bahasa pertama
• Indirect Translation: tidak menerjemahkan secara langsung dari source language/Bahasa
pertama
Ex: Japanesh-English-Indonesia
• Sight translation: menerjemahkan secara langsung (membaca lalu langsung menerjemahkan)
• Translationese: Bahasa terjemahan(tidak baku/kasar)
Why translation literary work?
1. Membantu karya sastra agar dapat di mengerti menggunakan Bahasa lain
2. Membantu penerjemah (valuable & ethical work out)
3. To be a literary translation
4. To be a writer
5. To be a better of literary work
6. Translation for pleasure
What are the tools of a translator?
1. Memolingual dictionaries
2. Bilingual
3. Search engine
4. Thesauis in the TL
5. Bilingual idiom dictionary
6. Speel checker for the TL
What are the relevant aspect of literature for a translator?
1. The linguistic aspects
2. The literary
3. The cultural
6. Translation for pleasure
What are the tools of a translator?
1. Memolingual dictionaries
2. Bilingual
3. Search engine
4. Thesauis in the TL
5. Bilingual idiom dictionary
6. Speel checker for the TL
What are the relevant aspect of literature for a translator?
1. The linguistic aspects
2. The literary
3. The cultural
Samuel Rindu Marito
18111067
Title
Deep into that darkness peering,
Long I stood there, wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals
Ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken,
And the stillness gave no token,
And the only word there spoken
Was the whispered word, "Lenore!"
This I whispered, and an echo
Murmured back the word, "Lenore!"
Merely this, and nothing more.
Translate ;
Title
Jauh ke dalam kegelapan itu aku mengintip,
Lama aku berdiri di sana, bertanya-tanya, takut,
Meragukan, memimpikan mimpi bukan manusia
Pernah berani bermimpi sebelumnya;
Tapi kesunyian itu tak terpecahkan,
Dan keheningan tidak memberi tanda,
Dan satu-satunya kata yang diucapkan di sana
Adalah kata yang berbisik, "Lenore!"
Ini aku berbisik, dan gema
Kembali menggumamkan kata, "Lenore!"
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Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this?
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Commented [DA2]: Whose poem is this?
Commented [DA3]: Yang tidak pernah berani dimimpikan
manusia sebelumnya
Commented [DA4]: How about “Hanya sepatah kata lirih,
“Lenore!””
Commented [DA5]: Nama itu kubisikkan, dan dibalas
gema
Yang menggumamkan, “Lenore!”
18111067
Title
Deep into that darkness peering,
Long I stood there, wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals
Ever dared to dream before;
But the silence was unbroken,
And the stillness gave no token,
And the only word there spoken
Was the whispered word, "Lenore!"
This I whispered, and an echo
Murmured back the word, "Lenore!"
Merely this, and nothing more.
Translate ;
Title
Jauh ke dalam kegelapan itu aku mengintip,
Lama aku berdiri di sana, bertanya-tanya, takut,
Meragukan, memimpikan mimpi bukan manusia
Pernah berani bermimpi sebelumnya;
Tapi kesunyian itu tak terpecahkan,
Dan keheningan tidak memberi tanda,
Dan satu-satunya kata yang diucapkan di sana
Adalah kata yang berbisik, "Lenore!"
Ini aku berbisik, dan gema
Kembali menggumamkan kata, "Lenore!"
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Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this?
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Commented [DA2]: Whose poem is this?
Commented [DA3]: Yang tidak pernah berani dimimpikan
manusia sebelumnya
Commented [DA4]: How about “Hanya sepatah kata lirih,
“Lenore!””
Commented [DA5]: Nama itu kubisikkan, dan dibalas
gema
Yang menggumamkan, “Lenore!”
Hanya ini, dan tidak lebih.
Di mana?
Di sana
Bagaimana?
Di sana yang terbaik
Ya… di sana
Di sana aku mendapatkanmu
Kamulah sumber ilmuku
Ilmu tuk senantiasa terpana
Senangkah di sana?
Mengapa tidak?
Di sana sumber inspirasiku
Di sana kutemukan ilmuku
Sumber ilmuku
Di guruku
Di kawanku di orang tuaku
Translate ;
Where?
There
How?
There the best
Yes… there
There I got you
Commented [DA6]: There it’s best
Di mana?
Di sana
Bagaimana?
Di sana yang terbaik
Ya… di sana
Di sana aku mendapatkanmu
Kamulah sumber ilmuku
Ilmu tuk senantiasa terpana
Senangkah di sana?
Mengapa tidak?
Di sana sumber inspirasiku
Di sana kutemukan ilmuku
Sumber ilmuku
Di guruku
Di kawanku di orang tuaku
Translate ;
Where?
There
How?
There the best
Yes… there
There I got you
Commented [DA6]: There it’s best
You are the source of my knowledge
Knowledge to always be stunned
Are you happy there?
Why not?
That's where my inspiration is
There I found my knowledge
My source of knowledge
In my teacher
In my friends in my parents
Knowledge to always be stunned
Are you happy there?
Why not?
That's where my inspiration is
There I found my knowledge
My source of knowledge
In my teacher
In my friends in my parents
NAME: SOPIAN HADI
NPM :20111015
SS 20 A
NATURAL POETRY BROKEN
Beauty is the past
Your fresh air is the problem
The warmth of the sun is first
Now different
No matter
Bother with the world
We are sorry
Because we are just a side of nature
PUISI ALAM RUSAK
Cantik iyalah masa lampau
udara segarmu iyalah masalalu
hangatnya cahaya matahari iyalah dahulu
sekarang berbeda
tiada peduli
repot dengan dunia
kami mohon maaf
sebab kami cuman sisi dari alama
PUKUL LIMA
Pukul lima petang
Menyaksikan matahari yang beranjak pulang
Ada rindu yang tertinggal
Bertahan pada gumpalan awan hitam kenangan;
Memeluk hujan
NPM :20111015
SS 20 A
NATURAL POETRY BROKEN
Beauty is the past
Your fresh air is the problem
The warmth of the sun is first
Now different
No matter
Bother with the world
We are sorry
Because we are just a side of nature
PUISI ALAM RUSAK
Cantik iyalah masa lampau
udara segarmu iyalah masalalu
hangatnya cahaya matahari iyalah dahulu
sekarang berbeda
tiada peduli
repot dengan dunia
kami mohon maaf
sebab kami cuman sisi dari alama
PUKUL LIMA
Pukul lima petang
Menyaksikan matahari yang beranjak pulang
Ada rindu yang tertinggal
Bertahan pada gumpalan awan hitam kenangan;
Memeluk hujan
FIVE o'clock
Five o'clock in the evening
watching the sun go home
there is a longing left
hang on to the black cloud of memories;
hug the rain
Five o'clock in the evening
watching the sun go home
there is a longing left
hang on to the black cloud of memories;
hug the rain
Name:Nelam Lendini
Npm:20111029
Prayer
my god
in pensive
I still say your name
Let it be difficult
Remembering you're full
Your light is so hot
Only candles twinkling in the dark
my god
I'm out of shape
destroyed
my god
I'm wandering in a foreign land
my god
At Your Door I knock
I can't turn away
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Npm:20111029
Prayer
my god
in pensive
I still say your name
Let it be difficult
Remembering you're full
Your light is so hot
Only candles twinkling in the dark
my god
I'm out of shape
destroyed
my god
I'm wandering in a foreign land
my god
At Your Door I knock
I can't turn away
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Rangkuman zoom
Terminologies~D ST, TT (source text, target text)
~ direct translation; penerjemah paham SL No indirect translation; tdk menerjemahkan lang sing or
source language ex Japanese - english -Indones an~D sight translation; menerjemahkan ser lang hing I
sekali membaca langsung menerjemah - no translationeses bahasa perjemah terjemahan(tolk baku,
terjemahan leasain)~ why translate literary works ? &pt.membantu karya sastra tub agar di defini bikan
the bhs lain.niem bantu Penerjemah (valuable ðical work out)- to be to ve a literary translator wn
terve a better of of literary works Translation for pleasure.
what are the fools of a translator? -monolingual dictionaries
bilingual
search engine (google) thesaurus in the TL
lingual idom dictionary
Lyme dictionary in the
Spell checker for TL
~ what are the relevant aspects of litera bure for translator? A linguistics aspects (semantik) the the
- the
Terminologies~D ST, TT (source text, target text)
~ direct translation; penerjemah paham SL No indirect translation; tdk menerjemahkan lang sing or
source language ex Japanese - english -Indones an~D sight translation; menerjemahkan ser lang hing I
sekali membaca langsung menerjemah - no translationeses bahasa perjemah terjemahan(tolk baku,
terjemahan leasain)~ why translate literary works ? &pt.membantu karya sastra tub agar di defini bikan
the bhs lain.niem bantu Penerjemah (valuable ðical work out)- to be to ve a literary translator wn
terve a better of of literary works Translation for pleasure.
what are the fools of a translator? -monolingual dictionaries
bilingual
search engine (google) thesaurus in the TL
lingual idom dictionary
Lyme dictionary in the
Spell checker for TL
~ what are the relevant aspects of litera bure for translator? A linguistics aspects (semantik) the the
- the
English – Indonesia Translation
Looking back up from my pen
I sometimes don’t know what to do
Should I stand up and try again
Falling back down, it be the end for you
As they say a’thousand words that insult my desire
People keep saying my dreams are just,
Just some feeble hallucination
My ideas to words, is a mist
I get up, concentrate, and thabk my dedication
As I stand bak up again and feed my starving fire
Ignore the voices that surround me
Let my hand and pen do all the work
My imagination are all free
I finish there, where my signature lurks
As my dreams as an author, is to inspire
Indonesia - English translation
Melihat kembali dari pena saya
Saya terkadang tidak tahu harus berbuat apa
Haruskah saya berdiri dan mencoba lagi?
Jatuh kembali, itu menjadi akhir untukmu
Saat mereka mengucapkan ribuan kata yang menghina keinginanku
Orang-orang terus mengatakan mimpiku adil,
Hanya halusinasi lemah
Ide-ide saya untuk kata-kata, adalah kabut
Saya bangun, berkonsentrasi, dan menghargai dedikasi saya
Saat saya berdiri lagi dan memberi makan api kelaparan saya
Looking back up from my pen
I sometimes don’t know what to do
Should I stand up and try again
Falling back down, it be the end for you
As they say a’thousand words that insult my desire
People keep saying my dreams are just,
Just some feeble hallucination
My ideas to words, is a mist
I get up, concentrate, and thabk my dedication
As I stand bak up again and feed my starving fire
Ignore the voices that surround me
Let my hand and pen do all the work
My imagination are all free
I finish there, where my signature lurks
As my dreams as an author, is to inspire
Indonesia - English translation
Melihat kembali dari pena saya
Saya terkadang tidak tahu harus berbuat apa
Haruskah saya berdiri dan mencoba lagi?
Jatuh kembali, itu menjadi akhir untukmu
Saat mereka mengucapkan ribuan kata yang menghina keinginanku
Orang-orang terus mengatakan mimpiku adil,
Hanya halusinasi lemah
Ide-ide saya untuk kata-kata, adalah kabut
Saya bangun, berkonsentrasi, dan menghargai dedikasi saya
Saat saya berdiri lagi dan memberi makan api kelaparan saya
Abaikan suara-suara yang mengelilingi saya
Biarkan tangan dan pena saya melakukan semua pekerjaan
Imajinasi saya semua bebas
Saya selesai di sana, di mana tanda tangan saya bersembunyi
Seperti impian saya sebagai penulis, adalah untuk menginspirasi
Meeting report summary
Presenter: Dirga
When translating a literary work into a language, it is not always necessary to translate it
immediately; also, we must examine how the reader can both have a reading experience that is
consistent with the original work. This means that the translator must consider linguistic, social, and
other factors. Meanings that are consistent with the readers' comprehension to make the text more
meaningful.
Paragraphs become a country that the reader's eye flies over looking for landmarks, reference
points, airports, bathrooms, and sex passages.
The quick reader devours a book like a skilled fish cleaner. The gills are gone, the tail, the scales, the
fins, then the fillet slides away swiftly as if fed to a seal, and only the slow reader, one whom those
with green teeth chew through like furious worms: only the reader whose finger falters in front of
long words, who moves the lips, who dances the text, will notice the strange crowd of images - flier,
butcher, seal - which have gathered to comment on the aims and activities of the speeding reader,
perhaps like gossips at a wedding.
This jostling of pictures, this crazy: collision of concepts - of landing strip, kernel, heart, guts, sex -
will not be felt or even recognized by the fast reader, because these readers are looking for the inner
core of meaning: the essence, the heart of the matter:
They seek what can be communicated in their own, other, and always less words: hence the
meaning of this text may be stated as follows: readers who read quickly read only for the most part
broad and conventional meanings."
Biarkan tangan dan pena saya melakukan semua pekerjaan
Imajinasi saya semua bebas
Saya selesai di sana, di mana tanda tangan saya bersembunyi
Seperti impian saya sebagai penulis, adalah untuk menginspirasi
Meeting report summary
Presenter: Dirga
When translating a literary work into a language, it is not always necessary to translate it
immediately; also, we must examine how the reader can both have a reading experience that is
consistent with the original work. This means that the translator must consider linguistic, social, and
other factors. Meanings that are consistent with the readers' comprehension to make the text more
meaningful.
Paragraphs become a country that the reader's eye flies over looking for landmarks, reference
points, airports, bathrooms, and sex passages.
The quick reader devours a book like a skilled fish cleaner. The gills are gone, the tail, the scales, the
fins, then the fillet slides away swiftly as if fed to a seal, and only the slow reader, one whom those
with green teeth chew through like furious worms: only the reader whose finger falters in front of
long words, who moves the lips, who dances the text, will notice the strange crowd of images - flier,
butcher, seal - which have gathered to comment on the aims and activities of the speeding reader,
perhaps like gossips at a wedding.
This jostling of pictures, this crazy: collision of concepts - of landing strip, kernel, heart, guts, sex -
will not be felt or even recognized by the fast reader, because these readers are looking for the inner
core of meaning: the essence, the heart of the matter:
They seek what can be communicated in their own, other, and always less words: hence the
meaning of this text may be stated as follows: readers who read quickly read only for the most part
broad and conventional meanings."
Name : Gisca Syanitia Eka Putri
NPM : 18111031
Literary Translation
1. English – Indonesia Poem
English :
To you I give the whole me,
For I believe that you’re my destiny.
To you I offer every best of my heart,
For I believe that you will value it.
Indonesia :
Untukmu aku berikan seluruh diriku,
Karena aku percaya kaulah takdirku.
Untukmu, kutawarkan segala terbaik dari hatiku
Karena aku percaya kau akan menghargainya.
2. Indonesia – English Poem
Indonesia :
Tutup matamu, lebarkan sayapmu
Berdoa dan milikilah impian yang hebat
Jangan pernah katakan kau tak akan pernah ceritakan
Sebab hidup ini singkat dan fana
English :
Close your eyes and spread your wings.
Make a wish and dream good dreams.
Don’t ever say you’ll never tell.
‘Cause life is short and very frail.
NPM : 18111031
Literary Translation
1. English – Indonesia Poem
English :
To you I give the whole me,
For I believe that you’re my destiny.
To you I offer every best of my heart,
For I believe that you will value it.
Indonesia :
Untukmu aku berikan seluruh diriku,
Karena aku percaya kaulah takdirku.
Untukmu, kutawarkan segala terbaik dari hatiku
Karena aku percaya kau akan menghargainya.
2. Indonesia – English Poem
Indonesia :
Tutup matamu, lebarkan sayapmu
Berdoa dan milikilah impian yang hebat
Jangan pernah katakan kau tak akan pernah ceritakan
Sebab hidup ini singkat dan fana
English :
Close your eyes and spread your wings.
Make a wish and dream good dreams.
Don’t ever say you’ll never tell.
‘Cause life is short and very frail.
Name : Indah Cahya Putri
NPM : 22111004PM
Universitas Khairun Ternate
1. Sebuah Rumah – Chairil Anwar
(….)
Ibuku tertidur dalam tertesendu,
Keramaian penjara sepi selalu,
Bapakku sendiri terbaring jemu,
Matanya menatap orang tersalib di batu!
A Room
(….)
My mom sleeping in soobing,
The jail’s crowd always dead
My dad liying down weary
His eyes are staring at the crucified man on the rock!
2. A Fairy Song – William Shakespears
Over hill, over dale,
Thorough bush, thorough brier,
Over park, over pale,
Thorough flood, thorough fire!
Lagu Peri
Diatas bukit, diatas lembah,
Melewati semak, melewati mawar/tanaman liar,
Diatas taman, diatas batas tempat,
Melewati banjir, melewati api!
NPM : 22111004PM
Universitas Khairun Ternate
1. Sebuah Rumah – Chairil Anwar
(….)
Ibuku tertidur dalam tertesendu,
Keramaian penjara sepi selalu,
Bapakku sendiri terbaring jemu,
Matanya menatap orang tersalib di batu!
A Room
(….)
My mom sleeping in soobing,
The jail’s crowd always dead
My dad liying down weary
His eyes are staring at the crucified man on the rock!
2. A Fairy Song – William Shakespears
Over hill, over dale,
Thorough bush, thorough brier,
Over park, over pale,
Thorough flood, thorough fire!
Lagu Peri
Diatas bukit, diatas lembah,
Melewati semak, melewati mawar/tanaman liar,
Diatas taman, diatas batas tempat,
Melewati banjir, melewati api!
Name : Rahel Dwi Saputri
NPM : 19111010
Literary Translation
Translate Poems English to Indonesia,
Footprints in the Sand
I dreamed I was walking along ( Aku bermimpi sedang berjalan)
The beach with the Lord, and ( Di sepanjang pantai bersama Tuhan)
Across the sky flashed scenes ( Melintasi adegan langit dari hidup ku)
From my life. For each scene I ( Di setiap adegan)
Noticed two sets of footprints in ( Saya melihat ada dua pasang jejak kaki di pasir )
The sand ; One belonged to me, and ( satu milikku, dan)
The other to the Lord. When the last ( Dan yang satunya milik Tuhan, saat adegan terakhir)
Scene of my life flashed before us, I ( melintas di depan kita)
Looked back at the footprints in the sand. ( Saya melihat kembali jejak kaki di pasir)
I noticed that many times along the path of ( Saya perhatikan berkali kali di sepanjang jalan hidup saya,)
My life, There was only one set of footprints. ( Hanya ada satu pasang jejak kaki.)
Translate Poems Indonesia to English,
Yang Fana Adalah Waktu ( Sapardi Djoko Damono)
Yang fana adalah waktu. Kita abadi (The Mortal is Time, We are Immortal)
Memungut detik demi detik, merangkainya seperti bunga ( Collecting second by second, stringing them
like flowers)
Sampai pada suatu hari ( Until one day)
Kita lupa untuk apa. ( we forget what it’s for )
“ Tapi, yang fana adalah waktu, bukan ?” ( But, the time is mortal, right ? )
Tanyamu, Kita abadi. ( Ask you, we are immortal )
Literary translation is the translation of any form of literature that requires a creative approach, such as
drama, poetry, fiction and non fiction, rhymes and literary articles. Literary translation requires a more
artistic poetic rather than an informative approach.
NPM : 19111010
Literary Translation
Translate Poems English to Indonesia,
Footprints in the Sand
I dreamed I was walking along ( Aku bermimpi sedang berjalan)
The beach with the Lord, and ( Di sepanjang pantai bersama Tuhan)
Across the sky flashed scenes ( Melintasi adegan langit dari hidup ku)
From my life. For each scene I ( Di setiap adegan)
Noticed two sets of footprints in ( Saya melihat ada dua pasang jejak kaki di pasir )
The sand ; One belonged to me, and ( satu milikku, dan)
The other to the Lord. When the last ( Dan yang satunya milik Tuhan, saat adegan terakhir)
Scene of my life flashed before us, I ( melintas di depan kita)
Looked back at the footprints in the sand. ( Saya melihat kembali jejak kaki di pasir)
I noticed that many times along the path of ( Saya perhatikan berkali kali di sepanjang jalan hidup saya,)
My life, There was only one set of footprints. ( Hanya ada satu pasang jejak kaki.)
Translate Poems Indonesia to English,
Yang Fana Adalah Waktu ( Sapardi Djoko Damono)
Yang fana adalah waktu. Kita abadi (The Mortal is Time, We are Immortal)
Memungut detik demi detik, merangkainya seperti bunga ( Collecting second by second, stringing them
like flowers)
Sampai pada suatu hari ( Until one day)
Kita lupa untuk apa. ( we forget what it’s for )
“ Tapi, yang fana adalah waktu, bukan ?” ( But, the time is mortal, right ? )
Tanyamu, Kita abadi. ( Ask you, we are immortal )
Literary translation is the translation of any form of literature that requires a creative approach, such as
drama, poetry, fiction and non fiction, rhymes and literary articles. Literary translation requires a more
artistic poetic rather than an informative approach.
Name : Rizma amalia Saadah
NPM : 20111043
English Literature
1. Poems - Indonesia translate to English
Maaf jika aku tidak bisa mengerti perasaanmu
karena selalu ingin menang atas egoku
kini aku akan berhenti
dan mengikhlaskan kau pergi
(Sorry if I can't understand your feelings
because I always want to win over my ego
now i will stop
and let you go
2. Poems - English translate Indonesia
Dear my self, it was so beautiful to see how far you’ve come
You’ve growing, healing and learning
Thus ridiculous things close this chapter
And lets move to new story happiness bigger
(Diriku yang terkasih, sangat indah melihat seberapa jauh kamu telah melangkah
Anda telah tumbuh, sembuh, dan belajar
Jadi hal-hal konyol menutup bab ini
Dan mari pindah ke cerita baru, kebahagiaan lebih besar)
Commented [DA1]: What aspect of the poem you like
the most? Are these your poems?
Commented [DA2]: Is this a good thing? Siapa
sebenarnya yang “selalu ingin menang atas egoku”?
Commented [DA3]: Have grown? Have been growing?
Are growing?
Commented [DA4]: “Diriku sayang”?
Commented [DA5]: How about using a more intimate
register? Like “Kamu”/”Kau”
Commented [DA6]: Apa yang menjadi hal-hal konyol?
NPM : 20111043
English Literature
1. Poems - Indonesia translate to English
Maaf jika aku tidak bisa mengerti perasaanmu
karena selalu ingin menang atas egoku
kini aku akan berhenti
dan mengikhlaskan kau pergi
(Sorry if I can't understand your feelings
because I always want to win over my ego
now i will stop
and let you go
2. Poems - English translate Indonesia
Dear my self, it was so beautiful to see how far you’ve come
You’ve growing, healing and learning
Thus ridiculous things close this chapter
And lets move to new story happiness bigger
(Diriku yang terkasih, sangat indah melihat seberapa jauh kamu telah melangkah
Anda telah tumbuh, sembuh, dan belajar
Jadi hal-hal konyol menutup bab ini
Dan mari pindah ke cerita baru, kebahagiaan lebih besar)
Commented [DA1]: What aspect of the poem you like
the most? Are these your poems?
Commented [DA2]: Is this a good thing? Siapa
sebenarnya yang “selalu ingin menang atas egoku”?
Commented [DA3]: Have grown? Have been growing?
Are growing?
Commented [DA4]: “Diriku sayang”?
Commented [DA5]: How about using a more intimate
register? Like “Kamu”/”Kau”
Commented [DA6]: Apa yang menjadi hal-hal konyol?
Report
Literary translation
To translate literature.
We can use literary translation to translate novels, short stories, film texts, songs, poems, ballads,
literary and critical articles, materials with literary content, magazines and articles, or other texts.
Why translate literary works?
• To be a literary translator (we can be paid)
• To be a writer
• To be a better reader of literary works
• Translation for pleasure (“the itch to translate”)
Tools to help you doing literary translate.
1. Monolingual dictionaries
2. Bilingual dictionaries
3. Search engine
4. Thesaurus in the TL
5. Bilingual idiom dictionary
6. Rhyme dictionary in the TL
7. Spell checker for the TL
Or
1. Google Traduction
2. K Pencarian - KBBI Daring
3. Oxford Learner's Dictionaries | Find definitions, translation...
4. Cambridge Dictionary | English Dictionary, Translations &...
5. Tesaurus Tematis Bahasa Indonesia
6. Rima Kata | Kamus Rima
7. Idioms and phrases
8. Google Translate
9. Idioms and phrases
10. Awan (Indonesia)
11. 85 Contoh Idiom dalam Bahasa Inggris dan Artinya
12. Daftar Tiruan Bunyi Terlengkap (Onomatope)
Literary translation
To translate literature.
We can use literary translation to translate novels, short stories, film texts, songs, poems, ballads,
literary and critical articles, materials with literary content, magazines and articles, or other texts.
Why translate literary works?
• To be a literary translator (we can be paid)
• To be a writer
• To be a better reader of literary works
• Translation for pleasure (“the itch to translate”)
Tools to help you doing literary translate.
1. Monolingual dictionaries
2. Bilingual dictionaries
3. Search engine
4. Thesaurus in the TL
5. Bilingual idiom dictionary
6. Rhyme dictionary in the TL
7. Spell checker for the TL
Or
1. Google Traduction
2. K Pencarian - KBBI Daring
3. Oxford Learner's Dictionaries | Find definitions, translation...
4. Cambridge Dictionary | English Dictionary, Translations &...
5. Tesaurus Tematis Bahasa Indonesia
6. Rima Kata | Kamus Rima
7. Idioms and phrases
8. Google Translate
9. Idioms and phrases
10. Awan (Indonesia)
11. 85 Contoh Idiom dalam Bahasa Inggris dan Artinya
12. Daftar Tiruan Bunyi Terlengkap (Onomatope)
13. Google Docs
14. Translate - StoryWeaver
14. Translate - StoryWeaver
Name: Terresa Alicia
NPM: 22113013PM
THE REPORT OF MEETING ABOUT LITERARY TRANSLATION
A. Theme
Discussion about the aspect and the theory that has related with Literary Translation.
B. Execution Time
1. Day/Date : Thursday, 6
th
October 2022
2. Time : 03.00 PM – 05.30 PM
3. Meeting.id : 936 5716 7891
4. Passcode : LTC@UTI
5. Application : Zoom Meeting
6. Link :
https://zoom.us/j/93657167891?pwd=bW9YTTFMN29tcnRBM29NNWRTWldC
QT09
C. Speaker
1. Dr. Afrianto, M.Hum., – The lecturer of Literary Translation at Teknokrat
University
2. Muhammad Dirgantara Evo Valentino – The translator and graduated from
Sanatadarma University and University of Chicago.
D. Purpose
1. Knowing more about translator as a job that suitable for major Literary
Translation.
2. Knowledgeable about the literary.
E. Substance
1. Conceive about the tool of correction in translationese.
2. Recognize the sample that have to do to be a translator and do translate.
NPM: 22113013PM
THE REPORT OF MEETING ABOUT LITERARY TRANSLATION
A. Theme
Discussion about the aspect and the theory that has related with Literary Translation.
B. Execution Time
1. Day/Date : Thursday, 6
th
October 2022
2. Time : 03.00 PM – 05.30 PM
3. Meeting.id : 936 5716 7891
4. Passcode : LTC@UTI
5. Application : Zoom Meeting
6. Link :
https://zoom.us/j/93657167891?pwd=bW9YTTFMN29tcnRBM29NNWRTWldC
QT09
C. Speaker
1. Dr. Afrianto, M.Hum., – The lecturer of Literary Translation at Teknokrat
University
2. Muhammad Dirgantara Evo Valentino – The translator and graduated from
Sanatadarma University and University of Chicago.
D. Purpose
1. Knowing more about translator as a job that suitable for major Literary
Translation.
2. Knowledgeable about the literary.
E. Substance
1. Conceive about the tool of correction in translationese.
2. Recognize the sample that have to do to be a translator and do translate.
3. Has a perspective about literary works and relevant aspects of literature for a
translator.
4. The kind of literal and liberal approach.
F. Documentation
translator.
4. The kind of literal and liberal approach.
F. Documentation
Aroma Maut
The Aroma of Death
Karya Hamid Jabbar
By Hamid Jabbar
Berapakah jarak antara hidup dan mati, sayangku?
How far is the distance between life and diedeath, my dear?
Barangkali satu denyut lepas, o satu denyut lepas
Perhaps one beat free, oh one beat free
tepat di saat tak jelas batas-batas, sayangku:
Precise in the moment do not clear of the limits, my dear:
Segalanya terhempas, o segalanya terhempas!
Everything is down, oh everything is down!
(Laut masih berombak, gelombangnya entah ke mana.
The sea is still undulating, the wave don't know where is it go.
Angin masih berhembus, topannya entah ke mana.
The wind is still blowing, the typhoon don't know where is it go.
Bumi masih beredar, getarnya sampai ke mana?
The earth still revolves, where is till the tremble?
Semesta masih belantara, sunyi sendiri ke mana?
The whole still maze, where is the quite of alone?
Commented [DA1]: How about “A heartbeat away?”
Commented [DA2]: It’s translationese!
Commented [DA3]: How about “The waves go I know not
where”
Commented [DA4]: Translationese.
The Aroma of Death
Karya Hamid Jabbar
By Hamid Jabbar
Berapakah jarak antara hidup dan mati, sayangku?
How far is the distance between life and diedeath, my dear?
Barangkali satu denyut lepas, o satu denyut lepas
Perhaps one beat free, oh one beat free
tepat di saat tak jelas batas-batas, sayangku:
Precise in the moment do not clear of the limits, my dear:
Segalanya terhempas, o segalanya terhempas!
Everything is down, oh everything is down!
(Laut masih berombak, gelombangnya entah ke mana.
The sea is still undulating, the wave don't know where is it go.
Angin masih berhembus, topannya entah ke mana.
The wind is still blowing, the typhoon don't know where is it go.
Bumi masih beredar, getarnya sampai ke mana?
The earth still revolves, where is till the tremble?
Semesta masih belantara, sunyi sendiri ke mana?
The whole still maze, where is the quite of alone?
Commented [DA1]: How about “A heartbeat away?”
Commented [DA2]: It’s translationese!
Commented [DA3]: How about “The waves go I know not
where”
Commented [DA4]: Translationese.
Berapakah jarak antara hidup dan mati, sayangku?
How far the distance between life and die, my dear?
Barangkali hilir-mudik di suatu titik
Perhaps in a point of steer
Tumpang-tindih merintih dalam satu nadi, sayangku:
Overlap of groan in one pulse, my dear:
Sampai tetes-embun pun selesai, tak menitik!
Even, until each drop of dew was over, not drip!
(Gelombang lain datang begitu lain.
Another wave come so mystifying.
Topan lain datang begitu lain.
Another typhoon come so astounding.
Gelap lain datang begitu lain.
Another black come so baffling.
Sunyi lain begitu datang sendiri tak bisa lain!
Another quite come alone and can't to be perplexing.
How far the distance between life and die, my dear?
Barangkali hilir-mudik di suatu titik
Perhaps in a point of steer
Tumpang-tindih merintih dalam satu nadi, sayangku:
Overlap of groan in one pulse, my dear:
Sampai tetes-embun pun selesai, tak menitik!
Even, until each drop of dew was over, not drip!
(Gelombang lain datang begitu lain.
Another wave come so mystifying.
Topan lain datang begitu lain.
Another typhoon come so astounding.
Gelap lain datang begitu lain.
Another black come so baffling.
Sunyi lain begitu datang sendiri tak bisa lain!
Another quite come alone and can't to be perplexing.
Farewell My Love
Selamat Jalan Cintaku
By Joanna Fuchs
Karya Joanna Fuchs
Is it really true our love is over now?
Apakah sungguh benar cinta kita berakhir sekarang?
Can it be time for us to say goodbye?
Dapatkah waktu untuk kita mengatakan selamat tinggal?
Too soon, it's much too soon, my love, for me;
Terlalu segera, terlalu cepat, cintaku, untukku;
You smile with ease, but I can only sigh.
Kamu tersenyum dengan tenang, tapi aku hanya dapat mengehela nafas napas keluh.
We've shared our lives and given so much love;
Kita telah membagikan kehidupan kita dan memberikan sangat banyak cinta;
I can't believe we're really going to part;
Aku tidak dapat percaya kita sungguh-sungguh terpecah belah;
You're moving toward a new life without me;
Kamu berpindah ke arah hidup baru tanpaku;
I'm left with scars upon my broken heart.
Aku ditinggalkan dengan bekas luka di atas hancurnya hatiku.
Commented [DA5]: Translationese
How about “Benarkah cinta kita berakhir sekarang?”
Commented [DA6]: Translationese
How about “Inikah saatnya kita mengucapkan selamat
tinggal?”
Commented [DA7]: Why do you switch from segera to
cepat?
Commented [DA8]: How about “enteng”
Selamat Jalan Cintaku
By Joanna Fuchs
Karya Joanna Fuchs
Is it really true our love is over now?
Apakah sungguh benar cinta kita berakhir sekarang?
Can it be time for us to say goodbye?
Dapatkah waktu untuk kita mengatakan selamat tinggal?
Too soon, it's much too soon, my love, for me;
Terlalu segera, terlalu cepat, cintaku, untukku;
You smile with ease, but I can only sigh.
Kamu tersenyum dengan tenang, tapi aku hanya dapat mengehela nafas napas keluh.
We've shared our lives and given so much love;
Kita telah membagikan kehidupan kita dan memberikan sangat banyak cinta;
I can't believe we're really going to part;
Aku tidak dapat percaya kita sungguh-sungguh terpecah belah;
You're moving toward a new life without me;
Kamu berpindah ke arah hidup baru tanpaku;
I'm left with scars upon my broken heart.
Aku ditinggalkan dengan bekas luka di atas hancurnya hatiku.
Commented [DA5]: Translationese
How about “Benarkah cinta kita berakhir sekarang?”
Commented [DA6]: Translationese
How about “Inikah saatnya kita mengucapkan selamat
tinggal?”
Commented [DA7]: Why do you switch from segera to
cepat?
Commented [DA8]: How about “enteng”
Go on now, if you must; I'll get along;
Pergilah sekarang, jika kamu harus; aku akan mendapatkannya;
How much it hurts, I don't want you to know.
Betapa banyak sakit ini, aku tidak ingin kamu mengetahuinya.
I'll set you free without inducing guilt,
Aku akan membiarkanmu bebas tanpa terpengaruh kesalahan,
But as you leave, the silent tears will flow.
Tapi seperti kamu pergi, keheningan air mataku akan mengalir.
I can't be mad; I love you way too much;
Aku tidak dapat marah; aku mencintaimu dengan sangat;
I'll hide my sadness now, so you can't tell.
Aku akan menyembunyikan kesedihanku sekarang, jadi kamu tidak dapat cerita.
Sweet happiness is what I wish for you;
Manisnya kebahagiaan adalah apa yang aku inginkan untukmu;
Farewell my love, I hope that you fare well.
Selamat jalan cintaku, aku harap kamu pergi dengan baik.
Translator: Terresa Alicia
Pergilah sekarang, jika kamu harus; aku akan mendapatkannya;
How much it hurts, I don't want you to know.
Betapa banyak sakit ini, aku tidak ingin kamu mengetahuinya.
I'll set you free without inducing guilt,
Aku akan membiarkanmu bebas tanpa terpengaruh kesalahan,
But as you leave, the silent tears will flow.
Tapi seperti kamu pergi, keheningan air mataku akan mengalir.
I can't be mad; I love you way too much;
Aku tidak dapat marah; aku mencintaimu dengan sangat;
I'll hide my sadness now, so you can't tell.
Aku akan menyembunyikan kesedihanku sekarang, jadi kamu tidak dapat cerita.
Sweet happiness is what I wish for you;
Manisnya kebahagiaan adalah apa yang aku inginkan untukmu;
Farewell my love, I hope that you fare well.
Selamat jalan cintaku, aku harap kamu pergi dengan baik.
Translator: Terresa Alicia
Name : Putri Aura Dea
NPM : 20111016
1. Indonesia to English
▪ Ingin rasanya aku bertemu denganmu
Tapi, menyapamu saja aku tak mampu
Bahkan anginpun diam membisu
Ketika aku mengadu tentang apa saja yang bertalian dengan dirimu
▪ I wish I could meet you
But I can't even say hello to you
Even the wind is silent
When I complain about anything related to you
2. English to Indonesia
▪ I always compare my older self
To those younger versions of me,
And I know I'm wasting too much time
Missing who I used to be
▪ Saya selalu membandingkan diri saya yang lebih tua
Untuk Dengan versi saya yang lebih muda,
Dan aku tahu aku membuang terlalu banyak waktu
Rindu aku yang dulu
Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this? What do you
like about the poem?
Commented [DA2]: Why do you saya instead of aku?
Commented [DA3]: How about “Yang sekarang?”
Commented [DA4]: How about “Yang sekarang”
Commented [DA5]: Why do you switch to aku?
Commented [DA6]: How about “Merindukan diriku yang
dulu”
NPM : 20111016
1. Indonesia to English
▪ Ingin rasanya aku bertemu denganmu
Tapi, menyapamu saja aku tak mampu
Bahkan anginpun diam membisu
Ketika aku mengadu tentang apa saja yang bertalian dengan dirimu
▪ I wish I could meet you
But I can't even say hello to you
Even the wind is silent
When I complain about anything related to you
2. English to Indonesia
▪ I always compare my older self
To those younger versions of me,
And I know I'm wasting too much time
Missing who I used to be
▪ Saya selalu membandingkan diri saya yang lebih tua
Untuk Dengan versi saya yang lebih muda,
Dan aku tahu aku membuang terlalu banyak waktu
Rindu aku yang dulu
Commented [DA1]: Whose poem is this? What do you
like about the poem?
Commented [DA2]: Why do you saya instead of aku?
Commented [DA3]: How about “Yang sekarang?”
Commented [DA4]: How about “Yang sekarang”
Commented [DA5]: Why do you switch to aku?
Commented [DA6]: How about “Merindukan diriku yang
dulu”
Name : Yesika Megantari
NPM : 17111011
Subject : Literary Transilation
*Malam Rindu
Malam minggu, hatiku ketar – ketir
Ku tak tahu apakah demokrasi dapat
Mengantarkan ku
Kepelukanmu dengan cara saksama
Dan dalam tempo sesingkat – singkatnya .
-Joko Pinurbo
*The silence of the night
Sunday night my heart feels nervous,
I dont know if I have the strength to take me into
Your arms in the right way,
And in the shortest time.
Commented [DA1]: Where does this come from? Have
you tried looking for the commonly accepted translation?
Commented [DA2]: How about “A Night of Longing”
Commented [DA3]: How about “It’s Sunday night!”
Commented [DA4]: How about “is”
Commented [DA5]: Why did you change democracy to I?
NPM : 17111011
Subject : Literary Transilation
*Malam Rindu
Malam minggu, hatiku ketar – ketir
Ku tak tahu apakah demokrasi dapat
Mengantarkan ku
Kepelukanmu dengan cara saksama
Dan dalam tempo sesingkat – singkatnya .
-Joko Pinurbo
*The silence of the night
Sunday night my heart feels nervous,
I dont know if I have the strength to take me into
Your arms in the right way,
And in the shortest time.
Commented [DA1]: Where does this come from? Have
you tried looking for the commonly accepted translation?
Commented [DA2]: How about “A Night of Longing”
Commented [DA3]: How about “It’s Sunday night!”
Commented [DA4]: How about “is”
Commented [DA5]: Why did you change democracy to I?
*Stiil I rise
You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twitsted lies,
You may trod me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I’ll rise
-maya Angelou
Kau bisa menuliskan tentang ku dalam sejarah mu
Dengan kebohongan mu yang pahit dan penuh kejanggalan,
Bahkan kamu bisa menginjakku di tanah yang sangat kotor
Tapi kau tahu , aku tetap saja seperti debu, dan akan bangkit.
You may write me down in history
With your bitter, twitsted lies,
You may trod me in the very dirt
But still, like dust, I’ll rise
-maya Angelou
Kau bisa menuliskan tentang ku dalam sejarah mu
Dengan kebohongan mu yang pahit dan penuh kejanggalan,
Bahkan kamu bisa menginjakku di tanah yang sangat kotor
Tapi kau tahu , aku tetap saja seperti debu, dan akan bangkit.
Translate:
In the Train
In the train.
Rain thickens on the window
Semarang, Solo…, is getting closer
Capture the twilight
Commented [DA1]: What do you think about the rhyme?
In the Train
In the train.
Rain thickens on the window
Semarang, Solo…, is getting closer
Capture the twilight
Commented [DA1]: What do you think about the rhyme?
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