Example Of Informative Speech Example
1. For the First question, How can I improve my introduction, including my hook
so that it will grab my audience s attention ?, I need to put some more details in my
introduction, to make it more specific, so that my audience s will have a better
understanding, that is how, and to improve my hook, which is to grab my
audience s attention, i will put the causes and the effects, like i put what is the
cause and what are the effects, then it would get their attention, because it quickly
shows the important information, and it seems astonishing enough, that is a way
to improve my hook, and again to put more details, making it more specific, giving
them a better understanding, that is how. 2. what can I do to clarify my Thesis
statement, or claim ?, I have to put more details, in order to make it more clear,
making have more sense, less confusing, being specific is the best way, so be more
specific, and I shouldn t use words that some people don t know, for example,
deceived, inquisitive, it s a way to not confuse them, and from preventing them to
slow down from the confusion, do not make it short, it should have more than
enough information, and last some evidence to back it up, because since it is
talking about the claim or Thesis statement, I use evidence to make it relate to the
claim or These statement, when it s related, it will make more sense this way, it will
show why, and how, it will explain, which is more specific, these are many ways to
clarify Thesis statement,