UPSC 2015 Topper Tina Dabi's Essay

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= MAHATMA GANDHI

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FUNCERTAIN GLORY ep India. UNDPS
2014 Multidumimsional Poverty Index
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Peer agamar elucalion ,heattly ancl,
Standards of Ling dmdicobors ,

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pun amd bulla Aimer. Poverty is
met sumply He absiner Of means to
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Gull. potential.

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dimumaions — physical , political, socia
> Ronnie ame pay cholegicad

The astourh of percnty at Hu
most base Level nass bodily arm
to am Amelividual . A person
UR bby poro aberquonttg
aupa from hnos anal malnububint
Ins Ampart bus 0%, hat amal
Shortens His oA her lpupan :

At tne social Level „a paor
puuon feels humel to be excluded ,
Tris social enduusión is best manifestea
an ine gorro tormumitios” of Hoe
middle and riety lasers . Access
to plans of Serial congrrgation >
seul participation anc engagement
be it pubic parks où malls
[> bung Murdered by “gates” anal
suit checks”, makes peor people
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Hna social wiv germinal. Tus, poverty
atharks san individuals social

Semslpiis . This disenchantment
might even take Hu form of

sutemtmint amd sde sorial

Mit growing commen
ame material un He economy,
dk is but natural for even poor
pouen to druam of “the good uy”
Ana, when Hungs de not Leek up
or the poor, Huy ant again drvien
to daselation met over making wen,
the basic nds meet us a
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anal peice site wi these duamı

Sum Sur rap. It
oe ae ee ae petty trepte
An wen Longin Pgamined um Like
smwggling

At He political Luvel , vietemet
perprdvared by poverty is of the

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Prometo Rund. Te isempamerns can,
sndividuat , à Stabbing Ame of ass
abitihis to moy tre cg Lama
bete guaranteed to dum 0% hu
by the Constitution. He os she does
met pastiipate meanin.
wy Hna polity » HAE us mo timo,
engagement win the state, wide
gus adas E ai pféeuté Ger Hem
Lo make informed licitiont
At Hu payohotogical anol cognitsid

Level, tne assault of poverty us
almsst Arippling . evivet att loots

ee ene la capables
he petertiot sema rloscol 5
am windiviclual “upon q
peng Of uXter wormlusenus. He
sets mo “hope for tus pubune waves
duscendls into amd
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60 , am AU ware. Society us toe
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so much £0 that it tan
sum almest Las à ie
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At tne socal Level, a society
tice ‚ne to the
wile qui, mat clurlops between
Tre dues amol post. The society
Loss owt om social
amd senal rehesion , we
A mps pea
ama harmeny m soutty

Ecmomically , He society doses
eux on wa fealty workforce which
cam venbiibute to us qrourth story
Instead „me economy ls buñdemed
willy millions bang Spent on p
otleviation programmes and subsioleiz
‚wich could Have bum utilize.
produselively elsewhere had poverty
mot entéted um tre gules place

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of trie population want participate
am Ak meaning fullg Werd
porety . Thus, poverty sbukus
at He very must of oismeiñacy and]
He empowerment Lt guañamtess to à
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Lars Bi ale ala
Gel harmony - This weakins He
bends ameng people amd Hampers

Thu» Pov has mdd
proved +0 be des set %
wietemee ogomsr He Individual,
amd society, Ht juas Hoz
AA amo satt at so
Tomy Levels HAL mios ds
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Porn & development witnaut
ead cote Ll perez wanted almays
be meak amd wncompéete. Gandirij
nro belrived Poverty +0 be the
ees sont se vistumer Supported
[sarvooaya”, whwely mean “UPLIFT
OF ALL.” He assınted trot marker
ham moss production > we should)
frome ‘production by mass ”
Indeed , of Gandhi talisman

Mag Gets , wihneus upliliving tre
mass out Be, eo tae
be truety Ph Heweren to
Hacke au vistemee
Prof perpetrated by poverty sure
RUE a Alongs im SU approach
Rothin man ena spot

“ "we med to go for a
RIGHTS BASED APPROACH . we mesol
to guañamtes to poor decent
stamdands +. abe vas ENTITLEMENTS]

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Rent kms ep the gevernmene
Surly as the RIGHT To FOOD’ amd the

perwung Emoto TO HEALTH? asıe tw

Lux shest ancl rest , à alt

rs we make ponerty Me
worst Rad OP votes vos
undirsteed . Only Hun can India
coma out of “its paradoxes Jam
ormieve vo certain? ges À

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“TRUE EDUCATION 15 THAT WHICH PROVES

USEFUL IN LIFE AND MAKES you

INDUSTRIOUS.”

“True education dou met contr
mung dm aequiwing of a fue facts
Of scien, stony „ titres or
ant, bat am the cLerelopment of,
rnonaetes ?

= DAVID O. MeKAY

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pren a a ne Aarne’ Se
called eier “usepue? or corre in dusbrisuk
Aidt im ina ds Mira,
pater from 1170 pre o
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education An India . No Indiaw
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Umirvisitda ón Hu wentd amd India
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wreatinity amd innovation, des
Acewrduing to 9014 ASER Survey,
“a studmt of Clase namnet
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emougn to ¿eel Ha commbuy out of
ite slumbsr to make eolucalion
an Imdia meamimgput, amd
addres He vorusus alnallmges
An the education Sector.

India has celebrated 68 years
of, Andepenaue , homer un
tens op education it autors Hu
colemiol manedset : Indian schools
ama nets conti to Unvpinadioe,

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education us ont wd propels am
wrdlividuol + innovate + improve
He sorieiy andl help Hu mation
progres. Imnovation, cAvatinity
amd oMgiwality com mur come
pen note Lang amd waiting.
sucky a methodology suppresses tre
cognitive pele of tre mand .
While Incliom eolucauen
tends to be fact and Kmewteolge
oriembeal , ever this vaspect of
education us
Books amd al material sp
NCERT home mot been updated
Sima 2000. Hew com Rrowledge
ma Locks an unes y
Of He putent content be sepas.
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The Imdian education aystems
basic weakness also uz LES in
to wncorperate vocational thal
Tú hos often Raman Indian
Shuodunis being tre Umemployable
Trek ub à mumalch between
Lea Imdlom s+udimts amd
anus moque by Hoe amare
a eat again undernmuns
education # Bee ne

Ome big failing af Indian
a $+ males it
gout chert of becoming tae
educaron is Pons tae oan
types op education . Whus India
fous ony ow fact based elucotion
> megluté volun based education,
Such as SOCIAL EDUCATION , MORAL
EDUCATION amd POLITICAL EDUCATION

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encounters en cultwus amd people
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cohımsion ama social harmmeng,
individuals must be feu eclucatrd|
fo equine te Praquaiud SLL set.
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big question mark im the scheme

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values ef honusty , tauthpulriss ,
Pundnus ete. van go a Long way
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our political aystem such as
a ee Ce
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emun PHYSICAL EDUCATION un
tre ovenall scheme of education .
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Truss Hunt vie muet At to
be dered am Indian scheme of
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wok SRE oriented as it cou met
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HT none quence ae
emma
à ms ds bugs
Even tre Rrewtidge de mot updated
+ ing skills
dry text books and coaching
AML of Hus as art creativity
amd Way amy names vor
dénrenvalion . Imdia has net produced
am Algmal tumnker sree many
years now. Tt has pollen short
of developung tre emanación of
imoividuals conduct to u
imatucutunald sectety .
ALL of His tow onty go if
we Ahamnge EUX approach Of Pocusing
towards

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builds serial rehısion , estobluchus

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Kamel NA] TALIM” (New Education)
Modul , wouely Ancoñpoñrates He Sowal,
moral amd petitical dimensions e
education amd follows the primocple
SOS AS YOU WORK’ (vocational
mur) . This tom +:
taomaperum India she
education onl make ka
tam” eclucaluo y me po
whelsome amd boreal, The
da am argent metal to debate the
whole dea of educallón im India ,
patie whole idea of ite
fod . We need +9 go back to
producing great trimmers She
Kautilya , sciemtists thu Aryabhatia
amd c.v. Raman; +0 Sood sciembste
Scientist, uke Am Sem , to take
Hu County to toghth ame phir
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PARADOY > India ont Of the sd
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growing economy, win gory became He a

Longest Economy im GDF tome, but 30% of
the coy Poor. UNDP's Multidrimensuomal
Poverty Indew holds 967. * He country

termal OBA. am STANDARDS OFF
LIVING EDU 2 MEALÍH INDICATORS . Taldea

Lover Br jaitad,

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